高考书面表达训练.pptVIP

1. 关系不一致 [误]If she have much money, she can buy many things that she want. [正] 1) were→was 2) have→has 3) its→their 4) hurries→hurried 5) →He lived in the countryside for two years, and he always remembered his life there. 写作中，同一主语和语态最好贯彻到底，不要随意地忽而主动语态，忽而被动语态。 6) won’t→ shouldn’t 语气一致 7) time→ times 2. 词性混淆 [误]When people have difficult, we should help them. [正]When people have difficulty, we should help them. 1) against→ is against 2) →She often goes to school by bus. 3) past→ passed 4) careful→ carefully 5) Asia→ Asian 6) Fortunate→ Fortunately 7) Jumped down into 3. 用词