高考英语一轮专项突破课件：阅读与写作—旅游景点介绍（人教版）.ppt

(8)冠词多余 例：When you read electronic cards，you can get not only pictures but also the background music and even animated cartoons. 改正：When you read electronic cards，you can get not only pictures but also background music and even animated cartoons. 应用：①Now the manager in the charge of the company makes it clear that part of the money spent on advertising is wasted. 改正：Now_the_manager_in_charge_of_the_company_makes_it _clear_that_part_of_the_money_spent_on_advertising_is_wasted. ②The teacher told his students not to write silly things in the public places. 改正：The_teacher_told_his_students_not_to_write_silly_things_ in_public_places. (9)句子成分残缺 例1：Some people against the suggestion. 改正：Some people are against the suggestion. 应用：①Our school is a famous school with long history. 改正：Our_school_is_a_famous_school_with_a_long_history. ②There being many subjects，the students can choose whichever they would like attend. 改正：There_being_many_subjects，the_students_can_choose_ whichever_they_would_like_to_attend. ③All flights this morning have put off because of thick fog. 改正：All_flights_this_morning_have_been_put_off_because_ of_thick_fog. ④The man was a good swimmer and soon pulled the drowning girl back the shore. 改正：The_man_was_a_good_swimmer_and_soon_pulled_the_ drowning_girl_back_to_the_shore. ⑤In past，the old man lived in the countryside. 改正：In_the_past，the_old_man_lived_in_the_countryside. (10)及物动词与不及物动词误用 例：Man depends water for many years. 改正：Man depends on water for many years. 应用：①The teacher caught me cheating in the exam，but luckily he didnt punish for cheating. 改正：The_teacher_caught_me_cheating_in_the_exam，but_ luckily_he_didnt_punish_me_for_cheating. ②One day some people on the shore listened shouts for help. 改正：One_day_some_people_on_the_shore_heard_shouts_ for_ help. (11)非谓语动词误用 例：The man admitted to break the glass. 改正：The man admitted breaking the glass. 应用：①His friends objected to his give up his job. 改正：His_friends_objected_to_his_giving_up_his_job. ②The girl