【创新设计】2012版高考英语总复习 unit 1 school life写作模板 牛津译林版.docVIP

模板__①__书信 典例 同龄压力(peer pressure)是青少年成长过程中经常遇到的问题。 假如你是某中学高三学生李明，你的美国笔友Jack来信询问如何应对同龄压力。请你根据以下要点提示给他回一封书信。 1．同龄压力不可避免； 2．每个人都是独特的，没必要跟他人比； 3．…… 注意： 1.词数不少于120词；2.可适当增加细节。 【写作策略】 1．仔细审题：(1)体裁：书信。(2)时态：一般现在时。(3)人称：第一人称。 2．确定结构：(1)Formal greeting——可以用 Dear Sir/Madam/Dr Smith等。(2)Body language——正文内容。 (3)Formal ending——正式建议信结束语还要带上 Yours truly/sincerely等。 3．筛选词汇：glad，common，vocabulary，make suggestions，put...to use，learn...from...等。) 4．句型搜索：(It’s very important for sb.to do，I’d like to...等。) 5．组句成篇：(常用firstly，secondly，besides，last but not least等。) 【范文赏析】 Dear Jack， In your last e-mail，you asked about how to deal with peer pressure.①I’m very glad to share my views with you. Peer pressure is a common problem for us young students.We often find someone ②who is superior to us.③For example，they come from a better family，or they have more talents.④Firstly，I think we must face it rather than avoid it.⑤Secondly，we must know that every one of us is unique and has our own advantages.We needn’t compare ourselves with others.⑥Thirdly，we can learn from those ⑦who have real talents.It’s useless just to envy them.By learning from their advantages，we can improve ourselves quickly. ⑧I hope my advice can be of help to you. 【名师点评】 ★①得体而礼貌地表达了自己的热情，同时，为下文→述建议做好了铺垫。 ★④⑤⑥层层递进，是文章具有思想性的集中体现。 ★⑧客气地表达了自己的愿望。 ★总体评价：思路清晰，层次感强；作者的建议具有极强的针对性。 【写作指导】 Elegance(优雅)(原文)So-so(普通) (1)I’m very glad to share my views with you. Now I will tell you how I deal with such problems. (2)We often find someone who is superior to us. We often find that some people are better than us in some aspects. (3)Firstly，I think we must face it rather than avoid it. Firstly，I think we must take this seriously. (4)By learning from their advantages，we can improve ourselves quickly. We can learn from their advantages and we can improve ourselves at the same time. (5)I hope my advice can be of help to you. I hope my advice will help you. 【临摹翻译】 1．范文佳句：In your last e-mail，you asked about how to deal with peer pressure