科技英语句法一些原则.ppt

科技英语句法的一些原则 修辞问题 第1章. 统一性原则 （A节）违反主从关系 一、主从颠倒 例 1 Transmission electron microscope and X-ray diffraction were used to study air-borne particulates collected in Chongqing, Sichuan Province, which are seriously damaged by acid rain. 本文利用透射电镜和X-射线的衍射技术，对酸雨危害较为严重的重庆市区大气颗粒物样品进行了较为细致的研究工作。 科技英语句法的一些原则 问题： 主句与从句颠倒，“利用透射电镜和X-射线衍射技术”是从句中的内容不要把这样的内容译到主句中。 改译为: Using transmission electron microscope and X-ray diffraction method, we have studied samples of air-borne particulates collected in Chongqing, Sichuan Province, which are seriously suffered from acid rain. 或 By using transmission electron microscope and X-ray diffraction method, studies were carried out on samples of air-borne particulates collected in Chongqing, Sichuan Province, which are seriously suffered from acid rain. 科技英语句法的一些原则 例 2 IABS model which could be used to select some kinds of regulatory mutants with high efficiency, was based on definite selectors and moderators， IABS模型可基于一定的选择剂和调节剂高效地选择某些调控突变体…... 科技英语句法的一些原则 问题： 主句与从句颠倒，“可基于一定的选择剂和调节剂”是从句中的内容不要把这样的内容译到主句中。 改译为: IABS model, (which was) based on definite selectors and moderators, was used to select some kinds of regulatory mutants with high efficiency, ... 科技英语句法的一些原则 二、主从并列 例 1 The order form was directed t the wrong plant; that is why it could not be filled and returned in time. 因定单送错厂家，故未能按期填好送回。 科技英语句法的一些原则 问题： 两句是主从关系句。 改译为: Because the order form was directed to a wrong plant, it could not be filled and returned in time. 或 The order form could not be filled and returned in time because of its delivery to a wrong plant. 科技英语句法的一些原则 例 2 The total area under natural protection reaches 19,330, that accounts for 2.1% of the total area of China. 自然保护区面积达19,330 公顷，占我国总面积的2.01%。 科技英语句法的一些原则 问题： 两句是主从关系句。 改译为: The total area under natural protection reaches 19,330, which accounts for 2.1% of the total area of China. 科技英语句法的一些原则 三、主从隔离 例 1 …, the calli were transferred to differentiation media (D1D4). On which, 100% of the calli produ