英语专业8级2013年作文试卷评析课程.pptVIP

这一段主题句（Topic Sentence）讲了奖善惩恶的社会可以大大地鼓励人们做好事和善待他人。下面用了两点来论证。 第一点讲了做好事需要得到社区和社会的认可和鼓励，尊重道德的良好的社会环境可以激励人们做好事。 第二点讲了如果社会对做好事的人不友好，会使人沮丧，从而缺乏自信，从而不愿意主动帮助他人如：摔倒的老人。 这段写得比较好，从社会坏境好和坏两方面来论证主题句。论据阐述清楚，有较好说服力 英语专业八级考试在线课堂 First of all, a society that rewards good people and punishes bad people can greatly encourage us to do good things and be nice to others. People are emotional creatures that longs for recognition and encouragement from their community. Being social animals, they are also desperate for the feeling that they are doing the “right things” approved by the society. Therefore