Everyon has a dream.doc

Everyone has a dream .Dreams are a kind of power for people to success .Johan Wolfgang von Goethe, German Poet and dramatist said The important thing in life is to have a at aim, and the determination to attain it. Dreams give people a way which is to success by working hard .Finally, you might become a man of success , a man of value . In my childhood ,I have a dream to become a doctor or nurses .Because They can help people who was ill . People called them angle in white .Doctors can ease patients pains even save peoples life .I want to become them .Though I study hard in the class and look for some books about them . In my senior high school ,I can look though many a book about Medicine .I also can ask my teacher for help about medical question .I learn a lot but I also find my weakness . At the present .Im a college student .I can learn much knowledge and I have more opportunities to come true my dream . I believe that I can achieve my dream by working hard . K显示全部 1.1 Everyone has a dream . [教师点评] [搭配统计] 动名搭配 have...dream 在语料库中出现过 2392 次 dream 前面的动词分布 , have 后面的名词分布have...ambition,have...aspiration,take...dream好评报错 1.2 Dreams are a kind of power for people to success . [教师点评] [低频警示] power for people to success 在语料库中无此用法，疑似中式英语 好评报错 [学习提示] 易混词汇: kind, sort, type, class, classification, category, species, variety 均有“种，类，类型”之意。 kind: 指性质相同，而且特征很相似，足以归为一类的人或东西。sort: 普通用词，文体较kind随便，指对人或对事物进行的大概分类，有时含贬义。type: 指客观界限比较清楚，有相同本质特点的同类事物，或指大致相似的同类事物。class: 正式用词，指门类、种类或优劣等级；用于指动植物的分类时，表示“纲”。classification: 指根据已经确定的类型对某一实物作鉴别和归类。category: 书面用词，特指有确切定义的群体。species: 书面用词，单复数同形。指生物分类上的种。variety: 强调有各自的特点，形式不同，品质不同的种类。 好评报错 1.3 Johan Wolfgang von Goethe, German Poet and dramatist said The important thing in life is to have a at aim, and the determination to attain it. [教师点评] [句子错误] 本句语法不规范，请检查！ 好评报错 [高分词汇] important是普通词汇，可以在某些语境中替换为高分词汇 crucial 或 essential crucial: extremely important/critical:It is crucial that the report should be on timeessential: (some