四级写作探析.ppt

Michelle Ma;马雪;35％;A;分值;;;篇;篇;字数不足应酌情扣分： 110――119词：扣1分； 100――109词：扣2分； 90――99词： 扣3分； 80――89词： 扣4分； 70――79词： 扣5分； 60――69词： 扣6分； 50――59词： 扣7分； 50字以下， 扣9分。 只写一段者：0-4分，只写两段者：0-9分（指规定三段的作文）。 ;;;写作模式;审题;写作步骤-审题;例 1;人----事----精神层面 同学---事---友谊;例 2;“Dear Andy, How are you? Your mother and I are fine.We both miss you and hope you are doing well.We look forward to seeing you again the next time your computer crashes and you come down-stairs for something to eat,Love,Mom and Dad.”;分析;审题;例 1;;例 2;;第一段： 因特网的兴起，它改变了人们的交流方式（优点），举例 第二段：因特网带给我们的负面因素，阻碍了面对面交流（缺点），举例 第三段：总结，事物的两面性，要把握好度有效控制;审题;不能单纯靠模板； 自创才是硬道理。;时态;词汇;词汇;Good： positive, favorable, great, rosy, fair, awesome, promising, perfect, pleasurable, excellent, outstanding, superior...;“起承转合”所需衔接词集锦 　　起：nowadays, at present, first of all, firstly; 　　承：secondly, besides, moreover, furthermore, obviously, in addition, in other words; 　　转：however, on the other hand, but, instead, conversely; 　　合：therefore, so, as a result, in short, in brief, in a word, in conclusion. ;1、列举 First of all, …;What’s more, …;Last but not the least,… 2、举例说明 Let’s take … as an excellent example. 3、强调 It is obvious/ apparent/ conceivable that As a matter of fact,…. There is no doubt that,…. 4、并列 In (the) other words;5、对照 Contrast with... On the contrary (by contrast) On one hand,…; On the other hand,…. 6、比较 Comparatively,…. Compared with… 7、原因 Due to/Owing to/Thanks to… As a result of… 8、结果 Because of this ,….. As a result of that, … Consequently,…;9、增加(补充) Moreover,… Furthermore (what is more),… For an addition,…. 10、结尾(总结) According to what we have talked above, we can arrive at the conclusion reasonably /naturally that….;1、… is the most + 形容词 + 名词 + (that) + 主词 + have ever + seen (known/ heard/ had/ read, etc) 2、Nothing is + more + 形容词 + than to + V 3、…cannot emphasize the importance of … too much. 4、It is universally acknowledged that + 句子 5、There is no doubt that + 句子 (毫无疑问，...) 6、That is the exact reason why… 7、It is obvious/ a