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make/pass laws be banned / punished / put in prison plant more trees live a low-carbon life Get more people to realize the importance of wildlife protection Pant more trees. Try to keep the balance. make special parks/ nature reserves / protection zones Do not buy fur products. Learn to write Suggestions --- Rewrite Activity 5 hunting habitat food environment Suggestions on animal protection ... education Complet your writing ________ In Danger present situation and reasons suggestions characteristics Evaluate your writings according to the evaluation standard. Self-evaluation: correct the mistakes in your writing. Peer evaluation. Class evaluation. Evaluation Evaluation standard Content Characteristics ? Situation and Reasons ? Suggestions ? Language Punctuation ? Spelling ? Complete sentence ? Present tense ? Future tense ? Logic Proper conjunctions ? Others ? Koalas in Danger Koalas which live in Australia are in danger. Three problems are threatening their survival. Firstly, they are being hunted for their soft fur to make purses and toys. Secondly, koalas habitats are being destroyed as men are cutting down eucalyptus （桉树）forests. Therefore, koalas are not only driven out of their home but they also lose their main food -- eucalyptus leaves. Possible Version Measures should be taken to protect koalas effectively. In my opinion, laws should be passed to protect the koalas from hunters. In order to protect their habitat, special protection zones should be set up in which eucalyptus trees are not allowed to cut down and the koalas are left in peace. At the same time, people are encouraged to plant more eucalyptus trees. If we do this, not only koalas will have enough food, but we’ll also have a better environment. After all, the earth belongs both to human beings and the animals. Possible Version Work in groups of 6, exchange and evaluate your writings according to the evaluation standard. Correct the mistakes and put your writings in the w