2014关于爱好的初中英语作文指导.docVIP

关于爱好的初中英语作文指导 题目 进入初四以来，面临即将到来的中考的压力，学生的课业负担日益繁重。在此种情况下，有人认为初四学生应该放弃爱好，专注学习，不要在时间紧迫的条件下浪费更多的时间；但还有人认为“磨刀不误砍柴工”，在课余时间坚持自己的爱好，不但不耽误学习，还可以调解大脑，促进学习。另外，爱好还可以怡情养性，陶冶情操增长知识，开阔视野。请就这一话题阐述你的观点。 要求：观点鲜明，行文流畅。 不少于80字，运用至少两种时态。 写作指导 1、文章开头示例： As a student in Grade Nine/Grade-Nine student, we are under great pressure due to the coming entrance examination. Therefore, some people suggest we should give up hobbies in order to focus on study. However, I hold the different idea. I think we should keep our hobbies for the following reasons. 2、论证： 正方（ advantages/pros) 1. make life more rich and colorful 2. find out what your strong points and passion lie in/find what your identity is 3. have a sense of achievement/success/accomplishment 4. increase your knowledge that we cannot learn in class and expand our views/ broaden one’s horizons 5. relax oneself/feel refreshed and then when we go back to study, we can focus on it with high efficiency (All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.)/study more effectively and efficiently/a good circle 6. bring us closer to success 7. have a positive attitude towards life/Life will take on a new dimension 8. become an all-rounded/well-rounded student and increase your competitive edge in the future 9. become a talented person instead of a bookworm 10 Make us healthy both physically and mentally 11. make more friends with those who share the same hobby with us 常见的错误 Frequent mistakes I完整句子与片段 I Complete sentences and sentence fragments 1）逗号错误 1) Comma faults: 错误Faulty: It was raining hard, they could not work in the fields. 改进Improved: 1 It was raining hard. They could not work in the fields. 2 It was raining hard; they could not work in the fields. 3 It was raining so hard that they could not work in the fields. 4 They could not work in the fields because it was raining hard. 5 It was raining hard, so they could not work in the field. 2) 句号错误 2）full stop faults: 错误 Faulty: If everyone makes a contribution to protecting t