漫画作文练习(就业+勤俭).pptVIP

漫画作文练习 1.就业类 2.品质类(勤俭) 漫画作文练习Ⅰ 漫画作文练习Ⅰ 文章布局 第一段 第一段 第一段 第一段 第一段 第二段 第二段 第二段 第二段 第二段 第二段 第二段 第三段 第三段 第三段 第三段 第三段 第三段 第三段 第三段 第三段 漫画作文练习Ⅱ 文章布局 第一段 第一段 第一段 第一段 第一段 第二段 第二段 第二段 第二段 第二段 第二段 第二段 第三段 第三段 第三段 第三段 第三段 第三段 交代文字 在图片的右上方，有四个明显的中文汉字：勤俭持家 In the upper right of the painting lie four big Chinese characters reading “managing households by being thrifty”. 过渡 尽管图片很简单，但却生动显示出中华民族的传统美德 Despite its simplicity, it vividly reveals the traditional Chinese virtue. (主题句) 毫无疑问，浪费的行为不利于构建和谐社会 Undoubtedly, the deed of wasting anything will be adverse to building a harmonious society. Undoubtedly, being frugal exerts a profound impact on both individuals and the society. 2.本体喻体法 在过去，很多艰苦朴素的人省吃俭用就像 图中的小孩一样 In the old days, most citizens, if not all, saved money on food and other expenses in much the same way that the child does. 3. 列举因素(原因结果) It is due to the following two points that Chinese people are not as economical as before. Initially, globalization has bettered people’s living standard. Another point, similarly vital, is that the virtue of being thrifty has not been valued due to the outlook transformation. 3 列举因素(宏观微观普遍特殊) Wasting does not only exist in daily life. Even worse, human race are abusing our natural resource. In terms of a sustainable society, maintaining is still indispensable in current years. 3 列举因素(透析本质) Rather than saving money to make a living, being economical is nothing but an advanced philosophy for building up a sustainable development for human race. 4.对比论证 尽管生活说平已经明显比以前提高了，我 们还是应该坚持我们的传统美德 Despite the fact that our living standard has been obviously improved than before, we Should stick to our traditional virtue. 5.反面论证 如果没有节俭的意识，长期浪费将必然导 致自然资源和国家财政的极大消耗 But for the awareness of being frugal, the long-term wasting would definitely cause the huge consumption of our natural and financial resources. 客观评价/个人评价 提出建议 展望未来 1. 客观评价 如果浪费的现象持续下去，整个社会将会收到极大的恶劣影响 Were the behavior of wasting to continue, the entire society would be badly af