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如何运用段落的几个展开法写作？ 1.段落的设计 段落需要事先设计好。首先要定下一个主题或一个中心意思，并用一句话表达出来（即主题句）；其次，选择有助于阐述这一中心意思的例子或细节，把它们一一列出；最后，把这些细节按逻辑顺序排好，一个段落的初稿就这样设计出来了。 初学者最好先写一个提纲。比方说，要写一个关于集邮的段落，可以先写下这样一个中心句子：集邮是一个很有意思的业余爱好，然后列出下面几点： （1）邮票上印有美丽的图案； （2）邮票上印有历史人物的横行； （3）每当收集到过去未见过的邮票时，我总是格外高兴； （4）从收集的邮票里，我能学到不少知识。 当你重读以上写好的四点提纲时，也许会发现最后一点还是放在前面更合适。按照这个提纲，你可以写出下面的段落： Philately is an interesting hobby. Every time I open my albums and look at the stamps Ive collected over the years, I learn something new. On many of them are printed drawings or pictures of rare birds, animals, trees or flowers. Under a magnifying glass they look very beautiful, and they help to increase my knowledge of nature. On other stamps there are portraits of historical figures, such as Qu Yuan and Dr. Sun Yatsen, George Washington and Chester W. Nimits. Whenever I see an unfamiliar name, I will try to find some information about the person by consulting an encyclopedia. In this way I have come to know something about quite a few people who are famous for one reason or another. Some of my friends and relatives who know I am interested in stamps often show me used envelopes. If I see a stamp which I have never seen before or I havent got yet, I will ask them to give it to me, and it seems that they are always kind enough to oblige me. It is always a delight to add a new stamp to my collection, and the more stamps I have, the more interested I am in philately. --Student 2. 按时间展开 讲故事或追述往事时最简单、也最清楚的表达方式就是按事件发生的时间顺序来叙述。先发生的事情先讲，后发生的事情后讲。请看例文： James Murray was born in Scotland in 1873, the son of a village tailor. He went to a parish school, but he left at 14 and he educated himself with pertinacity. He loved knowledge and he loved to impart it. He became a school master; he learned language after language and was alive to geology, archeology and phonetics, as well as to local politics. He had to leave Scotland because of the illness of his first wife, and he became a bank clerk in London. By sheer energy of scholarship, and without benefi