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、| !_ 一个人总要走陌生的路，看陌生的风景，听陌生的歌，然后在某个不经意的瞬间，你会发现，原本费尽心机想要忘记的事情真的就这么忘记了.. 图表作文 类型： 曲线图 （line chart, graph） 饼状图 （pie chart） 柱状图 （bar chart） 表格图 （table） 应对方法： Summarize the general features/trends; Select important information; Compare and contrast data. 图表作文基本结构 首段：首句 this graph shows the number/proportion/… of… (统计对象)in…(地点) in…(时间) 第二句 有可能的话总结总体趋势/特征 中间段落：顺次描述趋势，指出重要数据（极值点、相同点、始末点） 末段：重申最重要的趋势/特征 核心词汇 表示变化趋势的词汇： 表示上升 表示下降 表示不变 remain stable/steady; stay constant; 几个特殊点 在…附近波动：fluctuate (around) 达到顶点（最大值）peak at; reach the highest point… 达到低谷（最小值）hit the lowest point… 表示变化幅度的词汇 幅度大 dramatically; sharply; considerably; substantially 幅度中等 moderately; steadily 幅度小 slightly; small; minimal Task 1 例题 The table below shows three social and economic indicators of seven American countries for the year 1997. Country GDP per capita (USD) Adult illiteracy rate(%) Newspaper sales per 1000 people the Bahamas 13000 4.4 99 Argentina 9100 3.6 123 Brazil 4900 16.8 40 Mexico 4300 10.5 97 Surinam 3700 7.0 122 Jamaica 2600 15.2 63 Cuba 2100 4.4 118 请对比以下两篇作文 Sample Answer 1 It can be seen from the table the Bahamas and Argentina had GDP of $13000 and $9100 per capita, respectively, and the adult illiteracy rates were 4.4% and 3.6% in the two countries. Brazil and Mexico had GDP of $ 4900 and $ 4300 per capita, and their adult illiteracy rates are 16.8% and 10.5%. Surinam, Jamaica and Cuba had $3700, $2600, and $2100 respectively, with the adult illiteracy rate at 7.0%, 15.2% and 4.4%. Sample Answer 2 We can see that GDP per capita varies substantially from 2100 USD in Cuba to 13000 USD in the Bahamas, with 5 of the 7 countries below 5000 USD per capita GDP. The illiteracy rates also differ considerably. The highest illiteracy rates are for Brazil (16.8%) and Jamaica (15.2%), whilst Argentina has the lowest rate, at 3.6%. Mexico (10.5%) and Surinam (7%) lie in the middle. Surprisingly, the adult illiteracy rate for Cuba and the Bahamas is the same