十类话题搞死雅思写作-犯罪类.pptxVIP

十类话题搞死雅思写作-犯罪类环球雅思北京学校 孙笑飞微博：@环雅孙大圣青少年犯罪原因和惩罚措施送监狱 or 教育培训可否固定量刑In many parts of the world children and teenagers are committing more crimes.Why is this case happening?How should children or teenagers be punished?原因惩罚措施青少年犯罪个人原因，容易冲动教育优先团体原因，家庭，单亲家庭社会原因，多变分析说明式第一段引出主题，表明写作目的第二段分析原因第三段提出对策第四段总结全文There is no doubt that youth is the most valuable period throughout one person’s whole lifetime. However, some teenagers spend this time period in prison and fail to secure a bright future. In this essay, I will examine the reasons for this problem and propose the proper punishment.A1. 个人原因Firstly, teenagers are psychologically immature. For example, they tend to be tempted to do something wrong, in order to show off their personalities. Being inexperienced and ignorant, these children are likely to go astray under the influence of social ills.A2. 团体原因Secondly, some of those who commit crimes probably come from single-parent families which might cast a shadow when they were young. These teenagers therefore are likely to take extreme actions with the purpose of self-protection and defense.A3. 社会原因Last but not least, changeable society makes even the adults confused about what happiness and dreams are and how they can accomplish the target, let alone kids without any social experience and lack of social practice.B1. 教育为主Admittedly, one person is supposed to shoulder whatever he or she has done. However, the way to punish teenagers who commit crimes requires prudent consideration. This is mainly because imprisonment, the common punishment, will exert negative influences on their whole life. They will have a hard time hunting for…B1. 教育为主… a decent job after being discharged from prison. So, education and training, I believe, should be the main focus. For one thing, they are able to acquire some technical knowledge which helps to adapt to this highly competitively society. For another, they can thoroughly understand their wrongdoings and have the sense of social responsibility.Ov