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新四级写作基础第一次课笔记 新东方国内考试部：戴弘梧 Code=name A rose by any other name would smell as sweet. Miss Dai by any other name would still be____ A. Sweet B. gentle C. unknown D. none of the above A rose, by any other name, would still cost too much on Valentine’s Day. A sandwich by any other name...is still a sandwich 乱室家人 ＵＭＫＣ Doctoral advisee Hongwu Dai Doctoral advisor My motto The awareness of ignorance is the beginning of the wisdom. 无知是智慧的开端 要文绉绉就用名词 记忆-模仿-改写-创作 举一反三的改 意识到问题的存在就是问题解决的开端。 The awareness of the problem is the beginning of the solution. 为什么写作文这么痛苦！？ 无词可用，无话可写。 词不达意，用词不当。 不会表达，毫无内容。 表达空泛，缺乏逻辑。 结构松散，段落不清。 无词可用 无话可写 自暴自弃：抄写题目中出现的英文 直接写中文 “余曾听言：明知不可为而为之者，谓之悲壮；不知不可为而为之者，谓之悲哀。吾不知此生与英语无缘，故屡败四级战场而不悔，唯其独尊而不改，誓与其共存亡而不变。知我者谓我无辜；不知我者谓我无能。” 解决方式 蓄词 背诵写作常用词汇（400个单词） xdfcet4@126.com 密码：123456789 无话找话说 2004.6 An Introduction for Tourists 用好简单词 Do I love you because you are beautiful or are you beautiful because I love you? An old man who falls in love is like a flower in winter. Love makes time pass; time makes love pass. I love you more than yesterday, less than tomorrow. 为什么写作文这么痛苦！？ 无词可用，无话可写。 词不达意，用词不当。 不会表达，毫无内容。 表达空泛，缺乏逻辑。 结构松散，段落不清。 词不达意，用词不当 英式中文 欣欣向荣-比喻生长美好的样子 【我的弟弟长得欣欣向荣 】 有的...有的...都... 【农场里的鸡有的被抓去做鸡精，有的被拿去煮鸡汤，最后他们都死了。 】 中式英文 英语中的用词不当（高级错误） However, the speed of a car is much faster than that of a bicycle. However, the speed of a car is much higher than that of a bicycle. In the past the price of computer was so expensive that most families could not afford it. In the past the price of a computer was so high that most families could not afford it. The opportunity to be promoted in a joint venture will be smaller if one cannot speak English. The opportunity to be promoted in a joint venture will be poorer if one cannot speak English. 黄金模板句子误用-词的误用高级版 老外中式英文 別人都夸我( )，其实我( ) à別人都夸我(很帅)，其实我(是戴面具的)。 我以前常乱丟垃圾，但自从我当了一天清洁工后，就不会再乱丟了，我想，就這是所谓的「养儿方知父母恩」吧！ 中国的女孩很好看，眼睛好看，下巴好看，走路着也好看，我很想和她们交朋友，可