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1.增加较复杂的句子结构 润色提升示例 即时训练 书面表达（满分30分） 你班同学参加了 “二十一世纪中学生英文报组织的一场讨论。 讨论的主题是: 城市内是否可以豢养宠物(狗和猫)。请你根据下表所提供的信息，用英语给报社投稿，介绍讨论情况， 并说明自己的观点和建议。 饲养宠物 keep pets 污染环境 pollute the environment 吵闹声，甚至伤人 be noisy and may even attack people 安慰孤寡老人 give lonely elderly people comfort 和谐相处 live in harmony with 增添生活情趣 add fun to …. * 写作进阶提升之五 ——教你如何行文及润色 写作进阶提升 五个步骤 1、审题 （文体、主题、内容、人称、时态） 2、提炼要点，思考关键词 3、紧扣要点，连词成句 4、连句成文： ①主语和谓语 ②背景（增加时间、地点条件等） ③逻辑关系 ④开头与结尾 5、检查修改，规范抄写 ⑤语篇衔接 Some students think it is not good for people to keep pets in cities, because it will cause pollution to our environment. And the pets always make a noise that will disturb others. However, others think we should see the positive aspects of keeping animals. It is very necessary for the lonely old people to have company and pets can be a good choice. If we can get on well with the animals, it will enrich our life, too. I think if we really love animals, we needn’t show our love to them by keeping them, because the pets are not free and it’s not fair to the animals. If we donate the money used in keeping pets to some animal organizations, it will be more helpful to the animals. (By Dong Shuoyi) Some say that dogs make a big noise in the community, and sometime they even hurt people. Besides, animal drops also pollute the environment. They don’t agree to have pets in cities. Although I admit all the disadvantages they mentioned, compared to the highlights, pets bring such shortcomings seem to be as small as a pencil tip. As we see, a lovely kitty always keeps the old in company. It may bring good health to the old, as well as joy. And nowadays the harmonious society is being constantly promoted. We humans should live with animal friends in harmony as well. Only in this way can we make our earth a paradise for all the living. So, choose an