各单元作文九年级英语及评价.pptxVIP

English Writing 解析英语书面表达;作文评分标准： 第一档：13-15分（内容齐，语句通，基本无错误） 第二档：10-12分（内容齐，语句较通顺，有少数语言错误） 第三档：7-9分（内容齐，语句较通顺，有一些语言错误） 第四档：4-6分（内容齐，能写出少量句子，表达不连贯，语言错误较多） 第五档：0-3分（只能写出一些单词，不成句子，缺乏逻辑性，错误多）;平时训练中的几个注意点 平时注重解题技巧的养成 ;2、写作之中;③.重短轻长, 就易避难。 ;3.成文之后 ;③. 符合英语使用习惯 My work is very busy.;④. 书写规范, 卷面整洁。;Unit2 Topic1 Let’s do something to keep hazy weather away Nowadays, hazy weather has appeared(出现，发生) in many cities in China. The air pollution in these areas is very serious. Thats because many factories and cars give off (发出，放出)waste gas.（第一段：雾霾的原因） Because of the serious air pollution，people daren’t open windows to let in fresh air. When they go outdoors，they have to wear masks．Also，students have to stop outdoor activities to avoid breathing in bad air．On hazy（有薄雾的） days, many traffic accidents happen and many flights are delayed because people can’t see clearly．Last but not least（最后但也同样重要的），the serious air pollution has also caused many diseases and many people lose their lives(lose ones life 失去某人的生命).（第二段：导致的问题） As a student，we can go to school by bike instead of（代替，而不是，+v.ing）by car．We should call on（打电话）our friends to take the underground or the bus to work．We can call on people to plant more trees and ask the government to improve the public transport service （公共交通服务）.（第三段：采取的措施） We believe if we take actions, the air will be as fresh as（as+adj./adv.原级+as .和......一样....） before. （第四段：总结，号召 ） （红色字体为词组，请留心记一记喔！）;Unit2 Topic2 Creating Beautiful Environment, Building Pleasant Homes With the help of(=with ones help 在......的帮助下) high technology，life is getting more and more(后跟形容词原级，“越来越......”) comfortable and convenient. Most families have refrigerators, computers, mobile phones, cars and so on. We can eat kinds of fresh fruit and vegetables all year round(全年，一年到底). However, at the same time, green land has become less and more pollution has been caused.（过渡段） As students, we really need to(后跟动原，“需要做.....”) do s