09年海南宁夏高考英语改错及书面表达.ppt

Dear Mrs. Winthorp, So my first week at college is over! No lectures this morning so I think I’d email you and let you know what things are going. I’m glad to say that anything has worked out fine in the dorm. I remember asking for a room as far away from the lifts as possible and they find me a comfortable one on second floor. There are two girls from my course here and I plan to make friend with them so they we can help each other on the course work. Everyone else seems very nice and warmly here. ; Well, I had better to stop now. I’m going to attend mine first lesson this afternoon, for I’ve got some preparation to make. Keep in touch. Best, Carol; 假定你是李华，正在英国接受英语培训，住在一户英国人家里。今天你的房东Mrs Wilson 不在家，你准备外出，请给Mrs Wilson 写一留言条，内容包括： 1.外出购物 2.题房东还书 3.Tracy 来信留言： 1）咖啡屋（Bolton Coffee）见面取消 2）此事已告知Susan 3）尽快回电 注意： 1 . 词数100左右； 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。;关键词和短语：;连词成句：;增加细节，使行文连贯; At noon,I will have lunch with my friends.So you dont wait for me.At the moment,if you need something,you can call me or leave a message.In a word,I will go home as soon as early.You dont feel anxious. Yours, Li Hua ;王冬梅 Mrs Wilson, In order to buy some daily appliances,I will go (am going) out shopping with my friends.Whats more,I will return the book to library for you.In addition,Tracy called you and left a message,saying that the meeting at Bolton Coffee has been canceled and she gas informed Susan of the thing.If you have free time,Tracy asked you to call her back as soon as possible.;张雅婷 Mrs.Wilson, I will go out shopping in the afternoon,because I want to buy some beautiful clothes,and buy some fresh fruit for you.I remember that you borrow a book last Sunday,so I can help you to return the book.In the morning,Tracy called and left a message,saying the meeting at Bolton Coffee will be canceled,because her boyfriend has illed ;玉叫： Mrs.Wilson, I am going out shopping an