高中考试英语记叙文写作.pptVIP

story writing Harry Li Clear idea Correct grammar Complete passage Beautiful language Beautiful handwriting What is good writing? One day, Mr. Li was reading a book in his office after school when a ball broke the window and hit him on the head. Shocked, he took the ball and came downstairs to see who threw the ball. He met a little boy at the doorway and the boy said it was he who had thrown it and said sorry to Mr. Li. So Mr. Li praised the boy for his honesty and told the boy to be more careful next time. The boy thanked him for his kindness and said goodbye to him, running away with the ball. Six elements: time place person beginning process ending How to write a picture story? Tips 1 I had a very bad day yesterday. Everything go wrong. In the morning, my alarm clock didnt ring so I woke up an hour late. I am in such a hurry that I burned my hand when I was cooking breakfast. Correct any mistakes Then I run out of the house to catch the 8:30 bus, but of course I miss it. I was very unhappy because I know my teacher got angry if anyone was late for class. So I ran three miles to the school. But when I arrived there in the end, I find that it was Sunday Correct any mistakes How to write a picture story? Tips 2 1. Think about the story you want to tell 2. Pay attention to the tense in story 3. Make a list of all the things that happen 根据下列图画中 Tom 骑自行车的经历，用英语写一篇故事。 短文要写得连贯、完整。 Sample 1 Tom /ride a bike Along the street/road A few days ago/ the other day/ one day 2. Go over the pictures （who, what, where, when, why, how) A car / run fast to/run over him Tom/ fall off his bike Suddenly 2. Go over the pictures （who, what, where, when, why, how) The driver/ frightened/ run away 2. Go over the pictures （who, what, where, when, why, how) A woman/ remember the number of the car The police The driver/ catch 2. Go over the pictures （who, what, where, when, why, how) Key words senten