英语4级观察描述类作文.pptVIP

观察描述类作文 观察描述类作文在2003年以前从未出现在四级考试中，但2003年一年中连续出现了两次，分别为 The Day My Classmate Fell Ill (or Got Injured) 和 An Eyewitness Account of a Traffic Accident 需要注意以下几个方面： 1．交待背景 文章的开头应介绍时间、地点、人物等，这样有助于读者对文章的理解。例如 The Day My Classmate Fell Ill 一文，开头需要有一个简单的自我介绍，以便读者弄清楚作者在故事叙述中充当的角色。 2．详略得当 该类作文中细节描写必不可少，但过多的细节会冲淡文章的主题，扰乱读者的思路。因此在细节的选择上，只有选用那些与主题相关或能表达中心思想的，才能收到预期的效果。 3．条理清楚 观察描述类作文不同于论说文，一般不能按逻辑推理顺序来组织语言，也没有现成的框架可遵循，更谈不上总―分（―总）的结构。这类文章一般按照时间顺序或空间顺序来描述，所以必须层次清晰、条理清楚. An Eyewitness Account of a Traffic Accident （2003年6月） Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an eyewitness account of a traffic accident. You should write at least 120 words according to the outline given below in Chinese: 假设你在某日某时某地目击一起车祸，就此写一份见证书。见证书须包括以下几点： 1）车祸发生的时间及地点； 2）你所见到的车祸情况； 3）你对车祸原因的分析 ⑴ My name is Li Ming. ⑵ I am an English major in Peking University. ⑶ A week ago, I saw a traffic accident in a rainy day, which still sticks in my mind. ⑷ It was about 9:00 on Saturday morning, June 15th. ⑸ I was talking to my friends on the sidewalk near my university when I heard a sudden noise of clash of metals. ⑹ It happened just at the crossing nearby. ⑺ A motorbike was hit by a taxi. ⑻ I went up and found that the motorbike was badly damaged. ⑼ The driver was groaning on the ground, bleeding. ⑽ The street turned chaotic. ⑾ According to the stopping track on the road, it is clear that the motorbicycle failed to see the car coming from behind a truck. ⑿ On the other hand, the taxi driver was driving too fast in such a rainy day. ⒀ Anyway, I believe accidents may be avoided if everyone drove slowly. (157 words) 模板 第一段： My name is . I am . (自我介绍) At noon, around (时间) , I was when I was shocked by . (事故的发生) I saw . (第一眼所见场景) 第二段： Soon . (事情的发展一) I got there and found . (事情的发展二) At the same time I saw . (同时发生的事) It was obvious t