四级作文如何短时间提高.ppt

作文评分标准 2分-----条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误，且多数为严重错误。 5分-----基本切题。表达思想不够清楚，连贯性差。有较多的严重语言错误。 8分-----基本切题。表达思想比较清楚，文字尚连贯；但语言错误较多，其中有少量的严重错误。 11分-----切题。表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误。 14分------切题。表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯性较好。基本无语言错误。 　 Example 1. 1. Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay Free Admission to museums. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese: 1.越来越多的博物馆免费对外开放的目的是什么？ 2.也会带来一些问题； 3.你的看法？ 2分----- 条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误，且多数为严重错误。 Nowdays, Social appeared more and more free Admissions to museums. It’s in order to people wasted money. In addition, rich in people’s life and increase more knowledges. people visited the museum must have leaved some waste. In another hand, some visitors didn’t listen the museums workers…… 5分----- 基本切题。表达思想不够清楚，连贯性差。有较多的严重语言错误。 In order to enrich the culture of people, more and more museums were provided free admissions. Somebody thought it would take some problems like that. The first, because of free admissions of museums were attracted a large numbers of people who interested in all around the world. And those who take part in effected the traffic crowed around the museums, even though affected people who live in next to museum daily life. Besides, free admissions of museum would attracted thief came in. 8分----- 基本切题。表达思想比较清楚，文字尚连贯；但语言错误较多，其中有少量的严重错误 There is an interesting and instractive picture which goes like this: More and more museums are free for people. They want more people go to museums. But some people argue that it make some trouble for free for people. The reason is the economy of the museums would be worse than before. Worst of all, it may take a mess for more people come to the museums. 11分----- 切题。表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误。 Now more and more museums are free without charge to the public. Does that make any sence? Free admission to musuems helps us save money, but it also encourages us to go to museums to learn something else