考研强化写作12.pptVIP

考研强化写作（英语一）;Brief introduction;Model;2008 Part B Directions: Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should 1) describe the drawing briefly, 2) explain its intended meaning, and then 3) give your comments. You should write neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2.;1. Objective;4、Calligraphy;Scoring Criteria P.200;B. Varied Vocabulary Syntactic Variety;描绘、展示;句型多变基础：;lay emphasis on;2. 攻受互换;“认为”的表达：;Many people contend that the globalization is an inevitable tendency, which is beneficial for the mutual prosperity.（宾语从句）;C.少错误;We can deduce from illustration above that cartoonist is trying to attract attention to issue of cooperation.;二. The caption（提示语）indicate, “ You have only one leg and so do I. By sticking together, however, can we go anywhere we want.;According to a survey conducted among a group of young people who were in the same class years ago, no one who have difficulty in cooperating with their colleagues become executive or boss.;The cooperation with colleagues, partners, even competitors are extremely important for us.;三. I have to quit my job because my parents told me that they will buy me an apartment if I will work in my hometown.;时;a. 什么叫谓语;b. 主从句的时态在时间上要保持一致，状态可异;c. 最常用的时态;The behaviors of mankind have been causing severe harm and pollution to the nature, which is overburdened and will collapse（崩溃） if we do not rectify（纠正）our faults and misdeeds immediately and thoroughly （彻底的）.;四. 菊花残句或肿菊句;Most of books out of date, so would you please buying more new books add to the collection?;五. Modern people, especially the younger generation, lay more stress on earning money, the neglect of the elders become common to see.;a. 逗号前后都是完整的句子的话，其中一句（常是后句）必须要有连词！;b. 打句号的两句之间，常常要有副词来表示逻辑;最常出现的逻辑关系;六. 词性纠结;七. 小错误们;D. 重逻辑;E. 格式正确、语域得体;P. 246 范文;描述图表（7分）;2001 爱心是一盏灯;2002： 美国女孩穿着中国民族服装;2003： 温室花朵经不起风雨;2004：终点也是新起点;2005：养老足球赛;2006： 把崇拜 写在脸上;2007： 对手眼中的自己;2008年： 合作;2009年： 网络的 远与近;2010：文