写作提高三步阶梯：MyViewonOpportunity.pptVIP

写作提高三步阶梯 My View on Opportunity Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic My View on Opportunity. You must base your composition on the following instructions (given in Chinese): 有的人认为机会是极少的，另一些人则认为人人都会有某种机会。你的看法如何？ 写出你的理由并且适当举例。在你的文章结尾处不要忘记写出你的结论。 Your composition should be no less than 120 words. Remember to write it neatly. 经典议论文的布局模式一般为：引言—论点—论证—结论。那么模仿此法，这篇文章也可以划分为四个段落。第一段为引言段，在此段中只需写出这两种相反的观点就可以了。在第二段中提出自己的看法，并稍加说明。举例论证可作为第三段单独成段，充分、生动地论证自己的观点。最后在结论段中，回应主题，结束作文。 TS: Different opinions on opportunity. Some think… Others think… 初稿：(1) Some people think that the opportunity is very few, because they have never met the chance. (2) But others think that there are opportunities here and there. (3) Everyone may meet some kind of opportunities sometimes. 点石成金：(1) People have different opinions upon opportunity. (2) Some people regard opportunity a rare thing that is difficult to get. (3) But other people think that everyone has some kind of opportunities from time to time. 锦上添花：(1) There is no consensus of opinion among people as to how to view opportunity. (2) Some people suggest that opportunity is so rare that only the luckiest persons can obtain them, while some other people argue that in a sense everyone has some kind of opportunity from time to time. 点评： 第一段先概述人们对于机会的一般看法，提出积极的和消极的两种，为后文埋下伏笔。积极的看法为我所用，大书特书；消极的看法当作“靶子”，大批特批。因而，看似闲笔，实则有用；貌似松散，实则紧凑。 TS: I am for the latter opinion. “Every dog has its day.” Those who claim that they are unlucky… 初稿：(4) I am for the latter opinions. (5) There is a western saying “Every dog has its day.” (6) There are opportunities for everybody. (7) Everybody has opportunities to get success. (8) There is no exception to this rule. (9) People who claim that they don’t have good luck may be those who are not able to take opportunities. (10) They, maybe, are unable to recognize or use them. (11) We must try to find it and make use of it. 点石成金：(4) As for me, I prefer the latter opinion