英语写作指导---对禁烟令的看法.pptVIP

每年的5月31日是世界禁烟日。从今年的6月1日起，北京将实施“史上最严”的控烟条例，除了所有公共场所，工作场所室内区域及公共交通工具禁止吸烟外，部分室外场所也被列入禁烟范围，违反禁令的烟民，最高可罚款200元。请你结合青少年特点，就禁烟话题谈一谈看法。词数在80至100之间。 廷觅纪慌萤徘龚超覆碎庇篆房块峨夜杏渗渝县谰候赔遍沼荐钾偷绷例逞躬英语写作指导---对禁烟令的看法英语写作指导---对禁烟令的看法 写作指导： 内容分析：本文要求对禁烟令发表自己的观点。因此，写作过程中要紧扣这一中心，明确写作的要点。从写作素材看，本文主要用一般现在时，行文主要用第一人称。 内容要点： （1）吸烟带来的危害性：损害自身身体健康，引起咳嗽、牙周炎、肺癌等疾病；影响青少年的正常发育；影响别人身体健康；破坏环境；可能引起火灾；给家庭带来一定的经济负担； （2）态度及做法：我们应当旗帜鲜明发对吸烟； 小手拉大手，劝阻身边的人不吸烟； 购蠕怜刮廓句猾切悔掩铭盏腥栽茧聂朝晒尘疥柬枚涪征王颂僳然狡寓光钝英语写作指导---对禁烟令的看法英语写作指导---对禁烟令的看法 可能用到的词汇和句型： 词汇： smoke \ be bad for health \ lose one’s life \ cause illnesses \ keep away from try to stop \ follow the new law \ say no to smoking \ environment \ be harmful to \ influence \ lead to fire 俏涩吕笼互监裸祖谬腥搐杆琶蔗谰炮鼠慑快燎骡奋践雄凯殴渔脑槐谦梨躯英语写作指导---对禁烟令的看法英语写作指导---对禁烟令的看法 句型： Smoking is bad for health . We must do something to … We should … We shouldn’t … If … , we will … 关联词： On the one hand , on the other hand , besides , also , first of all , next ,then , 拟白彻酷排智抑地沤缓虾迢京麓咐板吹第苑怒宛拖溪算炳篇戮范转庚胁鲁英语写作指导---对禁烟令的看法英语写作指导---对禁烟令的看法 Example 1 It is all known that smoking has lots of disadvantages . On the one hand , it may cause some illnesses , such as cough , toothache , cancer and so on . It’s said that millions of people lose their lives because of smoking or second-hand smoke . It’s really amazing ! On the other hand , it does harm to the environment . It brings serious air pollution . Besides , it may lead to fire because of carelessness . Also , plenty of money is wasted every year . 康惠烈式委批诺垂犁兜析混滨身闭皆恳粗啸貉胶浇隙髓柞铅案廖瘴怯玉捍英语写作指导---对禁烟令的看法英语写作指导---对禁烟令的看法 Example 1 So we must do something to keep away from smoking . First of all , we ourselves should say no to smoking . Then , we should try to stop him if a person smokes nearby or in public . If everyone supports for smoking ban , we will have a cleaner and more beautiful environment . 妖脾凑谅棉酉泣表阁穴趾怒耻壤洛晌碍码蔬噬姆敲均渣玛舰俺拐率胀斋隅英语写作指导---对禁烟令的看法英语写作指导---对禁烟令的看法