高中英语写作示范课.ppt

pre-writing while-writing post-writing pre-writing while-writing post-writing pre-writing while-writing post-writing pre-writing while-writing post-writing Writing Practice Learn the writing process Practice using writing strategies 1 2 3 Learn the good structure of a passage Objectives 1 2 3 4 5 6 You can give it to whomever you choose. You can give it as often as you choose. It is always appreciated and may do more good than you will ever know. It costs you nothing to give it, absolutely free. You can give it to many people at the same time. It requires no special equipment. Can you Guess? Appreciation A poem: Let Us Smile Which sentence is repeated in the poem? Why? Let Us Smile The thing that goes the farthest toward making life worthwhile, That costs the least and does the most, is just a pleasant smile. The smile that bubbles(冒出) from the heart that loves its fellow men, Will drive away the clouds of gloom(朦胧) and coax(收获) the Sun again. It's full of worth and goodness, too, with manly kindness blend(融合); It’s worth a million dollars, and it doesn’t cost a cent. There is no room for sadness when we see a cheery smile; It always has the same good look; it’s never out of style; It nerves us on to try again when failure makes us blue; The dimples(酒窝) of encouragement are good for me and you. It pays the highest interest — for it is merely lent; It’s worth a million dollars, and it doesn’t cost a cent. 某英语报社拟成立“微笑俱乐部”，现向全球 征募会员。要求申请者提交一篇题为“I want to Smile”的英语短文。请你以申请者的身份，根据 以下思路图的提示用英语写一篇短文。 注意： 根据思路图适当展开，以使行文连贯； 词数：120左右 Writing I want to smile Base bread Fillings Top bread Body/ content Concluding paragraph (Conclusion) How to make the junk food healthy? What makes a good writing? Hamburger writing Topic paragraph (Introduction) Proper linking words Advanced vocabulary Varied sentence patterns Vegetables, salad, butter, meat… Hamburger writing Layout (Arrangement) Para.4 C