BOOK3Unit5写作答案版.pptVIP

写作练习 假如你是广东某中学的一名学生，刚 从从化市钱岗村广裕祠回来，请你根 据下面要点，介绍该景点并谈谈自己 的感受。 1. 广裕祠位于广东省从化市钱岗村； 2. 据说建于1426-1435年间，占地面积900平方米； 3. 历经数次修葺，7次有文字记载； 4. 是广东第一次发现有确切建筑年代的古建筑； 5. 当地村民和政府珍爱文化遗产，对它进行精心保护与修复； 6. 2003年获联合国文化遗产保护大奖一等奖。 范文欣赏 Located in Qiangang Village of Conghua City in Guangdong Province, Guangyu Temple, which covers an area of 900 square meters, is said to be built between 1426 and 1435. After it was first built, major repairs were constantly done in different dynasties, seven of which were recorded. It is the first discovery of ancient buildings with exact building time in our province. The local villagers and government treasure the grand relic, protect it with great care and repair it when necessary. Because of their great efforts, in 2003, Guangyu Temple won the first prize of the UN Award of the Cultural Relics Conservation. I feel proud to introduce Guangyu Temple to you. I hope you can come here to have a look yourself. 亮点赏析 1. 本文介绍了广裕祠的地理位置、占地面积及始建年代等。文章内容全面，条理清楚。 2. 作者运用了许多高级词汇及复杂句型，如treasure, grand relic, located in（过去分词短语作状语）， which covers ... 及seven of which wer（定语从句），sth. is said to be ... （固定句型），After it was ... （时间状语从句），when necessary（状语从句的省略）等。 Homework 1. Write a passage. Introduce our hometown to the visitors. In what direction is it of the capital of our province? What can a visitor see and hear in our hometown? 2. Finish summing up on Page40 after class. Writing GUIDED WRITING 如何介绍旅游景点 文体介绍 景点介绍属于应用文体，是说明文，目的在于用简洁的语言说明景点的地理位置、人文历史及旅游路线等。 写作点拔 景点介绍应注意以下几点： 1. 仔细观察，抓住事物的主要特征。 2. 安排好合理的说明顺序。在介绍方位时，最好按空间顺序来写，这样会使读者一目了然，在脑海中形成一个清晰的方位图。 3. 时态相对要统一，多用一般现在时，若涉及到历史事件的描述，则用一般过去时。 4.自然景观与人文景观的有机结合：不同的风景区，有不同的特点，要对每个参观过的地方的自然风景进行描述，同时要结合景观的历史、 当地的风土人情、文化、生态、环境保护等知识，以达到自然景观和人文景观的和谐统一。 5. 抒发感情，融情于景。景点介绍不同于一般的说明文，在描写景物时可以带个人感情色彩及生动的细节描写。 旅游景点介绍常用表达 1．介绍地理位置 be located in...；be situated in...；lie in...；...stand at the foot of/on the top of...; at home and abroad, 2．介绍人口 ...has a population of...；...a city/country with a population of... 5. 介绍交通 It is very conven