2015高考英语短文改错及书面表达练习（一）及答案.docVIP

2015高考英语短文改错及书面表达练习（1）及答案 短文改错-----1 　　Dear Bob, 　　Hello. I learn about you from my English teacher, 1. _______ 　　Miss Fang. I’d like to your penfriend, and get to 2. _______ 　　know more about your country. 　　First, let me tell you something more about myself.3. _______ 　　My name is Li Hua. I live in Beijing, where is the 4. _______ 　　capital of China. I go to Hongqi Middle School. We5. _______ 　　study quite a few subject, such as maths, Chinese, 6. _______ 　　English and physics. I use to play ping-pong a lot7. _______ 　　in my spare time, but now I am interesting in football.8. _______ 　　Do you play any ball games? What your favorite9. _______ 　　sport? I look forward to hear from you soon. 10. ______ 　　Yours, 　　Li Hua 　　答案及解析 　　1. learn 改为 learnt或learned。 　　2. to 后加 be 或 become。 　　3. 删去more。第一次告诉 Bob 关于自己的一些事情， 此处用 more 不合逻辑。 　　4. where 改为 which。在此非限定性定语从句中， 关系词在从句中作主语， 故用 which。 　　5. 此行无错。 　　6. subject 改为 subjects。quits a few 意为“相当多”， 修饰可数名词复数。 　　7. use 改为 used。据下文 but now 可知， 此处应用used to do 表示“过去常常 做某事”。 　　8. interesting 改为 interested。be interested in…为固定短语， “对……感兴趣”。 　　9. What 后加 is。此句无谓语。 　　10. hear 改为 hearing。look forward to doing sth.为固定短语。 对象：眼科医生(eye-doctor)王教授 主题：我国中小学生近视(short-sightedness)问题 基本信息：(1)发生率：略高于50％ (2)人数：世界第一 专家解读：(1)原因：很复杂 (2)治疗：没有哪一种药物能治愈近视 (3)建议：不要过度用眼；多参加户外活动 (4)特别提示：如何握笔也和近视有关 [写作内容] 根据以上情况写一篇采访报道，并包括如下内容： 1．采访的时间、对象和主题； 2．中小学生近视的发生率及人数； 3．专家解读。 [写作要求] 只能使用5个句子表达全部内容。 [评分标准] 句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章连贯。 【参考范文】基础写作： Last weekend, I had an interview with an eye-doctor, Professor Wang, about primary and middle students short-sightedness in our country. It is said that slightly more than 50% students, which ranks No. 1 in the world, are short-sighted. Professor Wang said the reason of short-sightedness is complicated and there is still no cure for short-sightedness. He suggested that we should avoid overusing our eyes and do more outdoor exercise. What’s more, since the