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Key to Model Test Two Part I Writing 【审题】分析题目和提纲可知，应该写一篇议论文。根据提纲要求，采用三段式结构，先 介绍目前很流行网上购物，然后分析网上购物的利弊，最后给出自己对网上购物的看法。【思 路一】 第一段：简述目前网上购物很流行这一现象； 第二段：对比分析网上购物的利弊（举买衣服的例子）：随时可购物，但不能触摸，不能试 穿； 第三段：表明自己的观点：有些商品可以网购，有些则最好去实品店购买。【范文一】 Shopping Online (1) With the rapid development of computer technology, online shopping is becoming a fashion, especially among college students and white  won’t walk into (2) regular stores. Instead, they get online and find almost anything they want within a few clicks. (3) The advantage of shopping online is obvious: You can do it 24/7. You can shop whenever you want — if you want to buy a new suit at 3 a m  own disadvantage too: you can’t touch the item, (5) let alone try it on. The material of the dress that you see on the screen may be lighter and thinner than what you had expected, and, it will probably look much better on the model than it does on you. (6) Personally, I find buying online to be an excellent way to shop for certain items. However, for other items, e g the typical stores one walks into to shop). In a BM store, I can see the real color, feel the material, and try on the item. 【点评】 （1）开门见山，指出网上购物很流行 （2 ）两者都指普通的实品商店 （3 ）说明网购的好处 （4 ）转折，说明网购的弊端 （5 ）“更不用说” （6 ）表明自己的观点 【思路二】第一段：说明网上购物非常流行； 第二段：说明网上购物有利有弊：商品更便宜，但其信息可能不准确，且网上支付有安全隐 患； 第三段：给出自己的看法：网上购物很方便，但使用前仍应权衡其利弊。【范文二】 Shopping Online (1) (2) Online shopping has now become a regular pastime of many Chinese. (2) Home shopping is convenient for most people. It also provides much more variety in a smaller amount of time than driving around town might produce. (3) However, (2) Internet shopping has its pros and cons just as any other advanced technology does. (4) On one hand, items are generally cheaper due to var