essay -Changes in Family Organization-英语高分写作范文.docVIP

Outline（Brainstorming） General Statement: Changes of the family organization have taken place in my country, which to some extent part of them may be contrary to the traditional views. Preview/Scope: This essay explores some of the viewpoints surrounding the family arrangement and takes both positive and negative effects into account. Positive Statement 1: People consider that the transforms of family organization are inevitable and do have profound influences on either the family members or the whole society. Supporting evidence1: female can be as the bread-winner in a modern family. women have the chance to gain an equal status to men. mother who has made a great achievement in her career may set a good example for her children. children have to deal with everything independently and get easier to become mature. Supporting evidence 2: Because of one-child policy, the families become much smaller. children are provided with more sense of responsibility. the only-child is easy to get all-sided consideration by their parents. based on Chinese basic conditions, less population is conducive for our country. Negative Statement 1: Such changes which have been discussed above do exert a bad impact on family patterns and have damaged traditional ones. Supporting evidence 1: female chooses to pursue her career outside may miss the critical periods in the growth of their children. Supporting evidence 2: the family planning policy children are too spoiled to be considerate of others. children have to stand more pressure Summary: Some changes in family organization have caused many negative effects. The innovation has formed an irreversible tendency and the benefits are evident. Recommendation: The government should play the role of leading the mainstream of transform in family patterns. During the developing process of the family structures, the advantages of the traditional ones will be considered and carried forward. Discussion Essay Question: How has family org