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各类型情景作文的写法。在情景作文中常用的叙事结构、细节扩充手段、抒情方法。各类型应用文的写法。写作中常用的高级词汇和高级句式。本节课主要是通过范文赏析，来体会情景作文在细节扩充、情感描写上的技巧。对于应用文，主要是通过范文欣赏注意功能句的运用。Part A 情景作文一、情景作文话题：爱与感恩类【场景设置】母亲节快要到了，为了报答母亲的养育之恩，我事先告诉妈妈，今天一天所有的家务活统一由我来干。一大早，我趁着妈妈还没起来，就把家里打扫得干干净净，并且为全家人做好了早餐。然后我去网上帮妈妈订了一束鲜花和晚上的电影票。在去取鲜花的途中，突然下起了雨，我看到一位年轻的妈妈把自己的孩子背在肩上，避开地上的水潭。在那一刻，我明白，此生都无法报答妈妈的爱。晚上，在妈妈看完电影出来之后，我在电影院外等着妈妈，并献上这一束鲜花，并对妈妈说：“您永远是我心中最善良最美丽的人”。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【基本情节描写】Mothers Day is around the corner. To show my appreciation to my mum, I told her in advance that I had decided to take over all the all housework on that day. Early in the morning, I got up trying not to wake up my mum, cleaned the house and prepared breakfast for the whole family. While doing all this work, I realized how hard it was for mum to keep this early morning routine for the past 18 years. Then I went online to order a bundle of flowers and a ticket to the newly-released romantic film for her, since I knew mum was a huge movie fan back in her college days. While I was on my way to pick up the flowers, it started to rain. Just then, I saw the m