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By Baoying Liu @ PFLS The most important person to me (1) In my life, there are many important people to me. They taught me knowledge and told me to be warm-hearted. But I think the most important person to me is my mother. When I was a little boy, I was always sick. So my mother had to visit the hospital very often. Once I got a fever at midnight and she took me to the hospital immediately. During that night, she didn’t close her eyes. And the next day, she was exhausted but didn’t go to sleep. She took care of me whenever I was sick. Also, she has taught me a lot of things, not only on studies but also on life. I’m very thankful to her. Therefore, I think my mother is the most important person to me. (130 words) 20’-4’=16’ 作文评价基本要求 内 容 (8’) 内容切题、充实、不写废话；意思连贯，表达清楚、准确、完整 语 言 (8’) 语言基本正确；用语规范、无或少见语法错误；拼写、大小写和标点正确 结 构 (4’) 词汇和句型句式运用恰当自如；文中有值得肯定的好的句型和表达形式 月考作文各项得分情况： 内容 (8’) 语言 (8’) 结构 (4’) 均分：7.8 6.8 1.2 The most important person to me (2) There’s no doubt that mum is the best guard in a childs life. The most important person to me is my mum. Mum offers me a warm shelter. I recalled the days when mum worried a lot about my health. When I was a little child, I was so weak that I often got sick. My mum cared me a lot. She sat beside my bed, keeping me comfortable and safe. However, I could still see the anxiety in her eyes under the dim light. As I grew older, I became more hot-tempered. When I was not satisfied with my grades, my mum just told me to take it easy and she wasnt even angry at my behavior. She showed great love and understanding. Mum, you are the most important person in my life. I really want to thank you because you keep me safe and keep me happy. Wherever I am, you are always with me. 20’-2’=18’ The most important person to me is my mum. Mum offers me a warm shelter. Beginning: Body: Ending: Mum, you a