[教学研究]长句翻译.pptVIP

例5：The physical size of a diffused resistor will involve a compromise between a large pattern with an easily controllable value, and a small pattern which will occupy a smaller area and have a less predictable value. 【译文】扩散电阻器的物理尺寸要作两方面的折衷考虑：图形大，电阻值就容易控制；图形小，占用面积就小，但电阻值却较难控制。 【解析】这是一个带有定语从句的英语复合句。主句是“The physical size of a diffused resistor will involve a compromise”。“which will occupy a smaller area and have a less predictable value”是限定性定语从句修饰先行词“a pattern”。译文采用分译法，把原文五个作定语用的形容“large,controllable,small,smaller,predictable”都译作了谓语，使句子通俗易懂。 例1：Suddenly the door bursts and the Time Traveler appears, dirty, disheveled, and bed ragged, with a nasty cut on his chin. 【译文】突然，门开了，时间旅行家出现了。她十分肮脏，衣冠不整，满身是泥，下巴严重划伤。 【解析】把形容词“dirty, disheveled, bed ragged”，名词“a nasty cut”分译成句子。 补充例句：分译法 例2：The little girls loved the theater, that world of personages taller than human beings, who swept upon the scene and invested it with their presences, their more than human voices, their gestures of gods and goddesses ruling a universe. 【译文】两个小姑娘爱看戏，喜爱戏剧的世界。那个世界的人物比凡人高大。他们堂堂地穿行于舞台，各有风采；他们的声音洪亮，非凡人可比；他们的举止宛如统治一个宇宙的男神和女神。 【解析】这个句子只带有一个同位语和一个非限定性定语从句。that world 是the theater的同位语，这个“theater”当然是指“戏剧”的意思。“their presence, their voices, their gestures”表示三个语义相关的并列结构作介词with的宾语，这三个并列结构可分离出来，单独译出。 补充例句：分译法 例3：The day before I was to leave I went walking across the river to the red mesa, where many times before I had gone to be alone with my thoughts. (N. S. Momaday: The End of My Childhood) 【译文】临行前一天，我淌过河来到红石山下。我以前曾多次来过这里，独自遐想一番。 【解析】这是个主从复合句，主句是“I went walking across the river to the red mesa”，其前有一个由“before”引导的状语从句“The day before I was to leave”，随后又有一个由“where”引导的定语从句。可将句子拆开分译成两句，译文通顺流畅，增强了表达效果。 补充例句：分译法 例4. Manufacturing processes may be classified as unit production with small quantities being made and mass production with large numbers of identical parts being produced. 【译文】制造过程可分为单件生产和大量生产。单件生产就是生产少量的零件，大量生产就是生产大量相同的零件。 补充例句：分译法 例5. The real challenge is how to create systems with