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以读“领”写 以读“润”写 上外附属双语学校 马婷婷 2010.5 一、学生的写作问题: e.g. The most important things in my life Use the following points as a guide: Q1: What are the important things in your life? Q2: Which one do you think is the most important thing? Q3: Why do you think so? 一、学生的写作问题: There are many important things in my life, such as my eyesight, my subjects. Now, the most important thing in my life is the test in June. If I do well in it, I will study in a good school, but if I do badly in it, I will study in a school that I don’t want. It’s very important, I think. (62字) 一、学生的写作问题: 写作问题: 结构松散，条理紊乱 内容空洞，选材不精 词汇贫乏，缺点睛句 二、 以读“领”写 “读”=“阅读” 读“教材课文”，读“课外文本” 二、 以读“领”写 仿写： 1、是对课文或范文的写作构思、篇章结构、表达 方式、遣词造句所体现的风格形式进行模仿 2、是写作训练初级阶段运用的重要方法 学生的思维火花： 三、以读“润”写 “润” 何 “主题中心” 初三作文中常见的主题: “点睛”句收集整理和变式运用 2010 初中英语教学与评估（五） A篇：“green” is just another word for “expensive”. “点睛”句收集整理和变式运用 2010 初中英语教学与评估（八） 第60题 词性转换 Nobody can decide the length of life. So we should live the moment. (long) “点睛”句收集整理和变式运用 2010 初中英语教学与评估（十） 第34题 选择题 There have been good time and bad time for Stephanie, but she says it’s important to remember both , because they are the treasure in her life. “点睛”句收集整理和变式运用 第58题 词性转换 Everybody knows that one flower makes no garden. (first) “点睛”句收集整理和变式运用 第60题 词性转换 He thinks that anything is possible as long as you put your mind to it. (impossible) “点睛”句收集整理和变式运用 4. 2010 初中英语教学与评估（十二） B篇：Part of Barrack Obama’s Back-to-school Speech These people succeeded because they understand that you can’t let your failures define you---you have to let them teach you. “点睛”句收集整理和变式运用 5. 2010 初中英语教学与评估（十六） A篇： This will lead you to a much better understanding and a deeper love. So start with something simple and see what wonderful things can follow… “点睛”句收集整理和变式运用 其它: 1. 原句： Sadness and regret filled his heart. “点睛”句收集整理和变式运用 2. 原句: I think she was my friend, is my friend and will be my friend fore