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（划线部分可替换） 下一页 上一页 gives too much / little weight to… to…. (共同之处说明II) 5) From the viewpoints of the best minds in our society, an important lesson we learned from / the greatest insight gained from is…. (进一步阐明) 6) And worst of all, the similarity between… lies in the fact that…. (共同之处说明III) 7)…, for example,…; likewise,…. (进一步阐明) 8) To… in our society, as the author points out, it is high time to…. (结尾句) Back 下一页 上一页 Reflections on “Stop Brain Drain” 就阅读的《制止人才外流》 一文谈谈自己的读后感，并对文章中涉及的主题发表看法 Back 下一页 上一页 Reflections on “Stop Brain Drain” 1) The article deals mainly with the problem of brain drain in the Indian society, but I can see parallels to our country. 2) To begin with, China, like India, is also cursed with the reality that the cream of her college graduates leaves every year for the more lucrative shores of America, England, Canada, etc. 3) According to a recent official report, every year witnesses a great number of the top graduates or post-graduates from Tsinghua Back 下一页 上一页 University or Peking University go abroad. 4) In addition, our undue emphasis on the rate of admission into colleges does not leave much room for the culture of students’ commitment to our country, just as India gives too much weight to training students in skills to train them in social thought. 5) From the viewpoints of the best minds in our society, an important lesson we learned from our current education is a lack of the national spirit in some college students. 6) And Back worst of all, the similarity between the problem of many college students in China and India lies in the fact that much of the past national pride has given way to blind faith in foreign things. 7) In India, for example, their once-proud “Thumbs Up” has become a branch of Coca-Cola; likewise, the color film “Kodak”, has controlled 20 percent shares of “Lucky”, the only national brand in China film industry. 8) To stop brain drain in our society, as the author points out, it is high time to enhance th