Unit 4 I used to be afraid of the dark写作课.ppt

二、列要点：根据提示和要求列出英文要点 二、列要点根据提示和要求列出英文要点 三、连词成句：使用句型，给每个句子加上主语 如： I used to be fat, but now I’m thin. I used to …, but now I… 二、列要点根据提示和要求列出英文要点 四、连句成篇：加上开头结尾和连接词 My life has changed a lot in the last few years. First, I used to be fat, but now I am thin. Second, I used to be quiet, but now I am outgoing……… I have made great progress(取得了巨大的进步），and I’ll try my best to be a better boy/girl. 五、美化：尽量使用多种不同的句型和词语。注意扩写相关要点。 My life has changed a lot in the last few years. First, I used to be fat, but now I am thin. Because I play sports everyday. Second, I used to be quiet, but now I am outgoing. I have made many friends. ……… I have made great progress(取得了巨大的进步），and I’ll try my best to be a better boy/girl. 五、检查：先看字数是否达到要求，再通读全文，检查是否有人称、时态、单复数、拼写和搭配等错误 My life has changed a lot in the last few years. First, I used to be fat, but now I am thin. Because I play sports everyday. Second, I used to be quiet, but now I am outgoing. I have made many friends.Third, I used to talk with others in class and I didn’t use to listen to the teachers. Because I have no interest in studying. But now I listen to the teacher carefully， and I take notes every day. What’s more(而且）, I didn’t use to study at night， and I used to copy others’ homework. But now I study hard at home every night.Only in this way can I get into a good high school. Finally (最后），I used to fight with other students. But now I always help my classmates. Because I want to make more friends. I have made great progress(取得了巨大的进步），and I’ll try my best to be a better boy/girl. * Appearance (外貌) Personality （性格） tall / short outgoing / quiet straight / curly hair funny / serious beautiful / ugly angry / friendly fat / thin careful / careless wear glasses happy / unhappy … hard-working / lazy … She used to be …, but now she is … She used to have…, but now she has… quiet … outgoing … outgoing quiet serious friendly silent active long hair short hair straig