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——2009福建省高考英语书面表达 高二英语备课组 ; 最开放的命题 最有话可说 最深刻的寓意 最完美的结合（内容与形式） ;试题分析;内容要点以及语言结构;数据分析： 08、09年高考书面表达得分情况 ;三、存在问题分析;错误类型;错误类型;错误类型;亮点（开头、推展句及结尾）;3) 概括式 As we know, smiling is good for our health. It’s universally acknowledged that smiling is of great benefit to our daily life. 4）例举式 There are many advantages of smiling. For instance, smiling can help me to have a happy feeling... It is good for us to smile. For example, smiling can release the pressure from study and life, which helps us. ;亮点（开头、推展句及结尾）;亮点（开头、推展句及结尾）;3）排比式 In a word, a smile can bring happiness to me； a smile can make me grow healthier. So I want to smile. 4）建议式 In a word, I want to smile. My fellow students, take action please. So why not smile at everyone around? Why not smile today? Remember to smile no matter what happens. If everyone smiles at others, our world will be a much better one. ;书面表达高分秘诀：;4．行文流畅，可读性强。 有的学生能正确处理好句子与句子之间，词汇与词汇之间的联系，整篇文章衔接自然，脉络清楚，可读性强。 In a word, the more often I smile, the more likely I am to succeed. 5．首尾呼应，强化主题。 有的文章结尾有力，起到强化主题，画龙点睛的作用。加深读者的印象。 6．书写规范，赏心悦目。很多考生的书面表达字迹清楚、字体端正，大小写、标点正确无误，给人以美的享受，令改卷老师心旷神怡。 ;佳作欣赏（1）; In addition, my friends deserve my smile because they are the ones who believe in me and help me out of many problems. Last but not least, I will smile at my teacher for their constant encouragement and great devotion to my progress. And I will also smile at myself for it certainly will benefit me quite a lot. Given a big smile, I’ll be much more energetic to finish my work. In a word, I want to smile at everyone around me to bring everyone a smiling day. ;佳作欣赏（2）; And last but not the least, I always smile at myself. The moment that I do a bad job or come across some difficulties, I smile at myself and feel confident about myself in a minute. Only then will I be able to get over all the obstacles. So it’s smiling that leads me to success. Shortly speaking, I can not emph