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成绩对外经济贸易大学 成绩 2012— 2013学年第二学期期末考试 课程代码及课序号 ENG407 2 课程名称 商务英语写作 学 号 201001289 姓 名 张慧平 学 院 经贸院 专 业 国际经济与贸易 考试时间 2013.6 Rewrite the letter below to confirm an order, focusing on the correct use of the English language as nut-shelled in the eight C’s, and on the clear presentation of much information, to a professional reader in an international business environment. (25 marks) No.W/756 We confirm our agreement to supply the following goods: Description: Band Name: “Popular” watch, “Regent” watch, “Aristocrat” watch, Quantity:(piece) 3000, 2000, 1000, Packing: each watch put in a transparent plastic bag, each dozen to be packed in a tin-lined carton, with 10 dozen cartons in a wooden case. Price: CIF New York per box, U.S. dollars, 15 each, 22 each, 35 each. Payment: 100% by irrevocable letter of credit opened through a bank to be proved by Bank of China, drawn at sight. Insurance: All Risks, 150% invoice value. Delivery: By ship. ASAP. Remarks: We are now enclosing the Sales Confirmation in duplicate for your countersignature, one copy of which kindly return to us. Dear Sirs ORDER NUMBER W/756 We are very pleased to receive your Order No. W/756 of watches. It will have our immediate attention, and the goods will be forwarded to you just as soon as possible. We would like to further confirm you the following merchandise on terms and conditions, subject to our final confirmation, as below. Quantity(piece) Brand Name Price (CIF New York per box) 3,000 “Popular” watch US$ 15 2,000 “Regent” watch US$ 22 1,000 “Aristocrat” watch US$ 35 Packing: Each watch is put in a transparent plastic bag, each dozen is packed in a tin-lined carton, with 10 dozen cartons in a wooden case. Payment: 100% by irrevocable letter of credit opened through a bank to be proved by Bank of China and to be drawn at sight Insurance: All Risks, 150% invoice value. Delivery: The