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2011安徽高考英语作文 　　2016-2016安徽高考英语作文 范文和详解 　　假设你正在参加全省中学生英语演讲比赛，请你针对有些父母经常翻看孩子日记或书包这一现象，写一篇演讲稿，陈述你的观点。 　　演讲稿的主要内容应认为同学们不必为此苦恼；希望能够体谅父母的苦衷；建议与父母进行交流和沟通。注意： 　　【参考范文】Good morning, ladies and gentlemen. 　　Some of us are having problems with our parents, as they often look into our school bags or read our diaries. I fully understand why we are not comfortable about it, but there’s no need to feel too sad. Our parents are checking our bags or diaries to make sure we’re not getting into any trouble. They have probably heard some horrible stories about other kids and thought we might do the same. Or perhaps they just want to connect with us but are doing it all wrong. My suggestion is: Tell them we want them to trust us as much as we’d like to trust them. If you don’t think you can talk to them, write them a letter and leave it lying around—they are bound to read it. 　　Thank you! 　　【解析】本文属于提纲类作文，体裁为应用文中的演讲稿，题材的现实性强，考生的话语较多，显见这种作文，难度不大，考生应注意基本语言和句式的运用，以及上下文的过渡。本文中使用了look into, make sure, be bound to等短语以及as，if引导的状语从句和why引导的宾语从句。 　　[2016安徽卷] 　　假设你将参加某英语杂志社开展的一次征文活动，征文的内容要求你在电视、手机和网络三者中，放弃其中一个并陈述理由。请你以“Which would you give up:TV, cell, or Web?”为题，写一篇英语短文。 　　注意：1.词数100左右； 　　2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 　　We are now living in an information age, in which TV,cells and the Web are widely used. It seems that many people cannot enjoy themselves without them. 　　However, if I had to give up one of them, I would turn off the TV rather than switch off my cell or cut off the Internet. I could do without TV because few shows take my fancy and there’re too many commercials. Besides, most programs on TV are also available elsewhere. 　　As for cells and the Web, they are more necessary to me. I need a cell to keep in touch with my friends and family, and almost all information can be gathered on the Internet. 　　点评：本文层次清晰。第一段提出文章的主题，第二段提出选择并阐述理由，第三段说明了保留另外两个选择的原因，这三段用了连词however，as for 是段落衔接自然。在文章中，作者用了定语从句in which TV，cells…、虚拟语气、rather than、原因状语从句等复杂的句式，句子长短结合，语言流畅，充分展示了作者写作功底。 　　2016年 　　书面表达(满分25分) 　　某校英文报