2019秋外研版九年级英语下册Module 3模块话题写作同步测试.docx

Module 3　模块话题写作[见学生用书B60] 【好题在线】 社会正在不断变化，请以“Before and Now”为题写一篇英语短文。 要求：1.从以下几方面入手：the world around us，health and fitness，education，free time； 2．适当运用比较级； 3．80～100词(题目已给出，不计入总词数)。 Before and Now ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ 【话题写作】 本模块的话题为“现在与过去”，主要的命题形式有以下两种：1.将过去生活和现在生活(或其中一方面)进行对比；2.描写自己想象中的未来生活。 【佳作欣赏】 Before and Now Today the world around us has changed a lot.① And there are some changes in our life.② First，③ health and fitness.With the development of medicine，people live longer than before.But there is more junk food.④ Usually children like eating it.People should pay more attention to diet and illness. Second，③ education.Children are under more pressure than before.They have more homework and exams.They need more reading and writing practice. Third，③ free time.During the free time，people have more things to do.For example，playing games，watching TV，riding a bike and so on.⑤ But they don't have as much free time as before. Generally speaking，I think life is better today.⑥ We eat better and we live longer. 【精彩点评】 ①现在完成时使用恰当，符合此题目给出的语境。 ②此句使用there be句型高度概括了我们的生活发生了一些变化，为后文分三方面展开描述提供了主题句，使文章结构紧凑。 ③文章涉及健康与运动、教育、空闲时间等方面，但通过使用first、second、third等副词，使得文章脉络清晰，非常有条理性。 ④上一句通过比较级对比了人们过去和现在的寿命，表明人类的健康正在向着好的方向发展。这一句通过转折连词but点出了与过去相比，现在不好的一面。通过两方面的对比，使得文章内容更加充实，叙述更加准确。 ⑤本句承接上一句，使用for example加例子使文章细节丰富，使句子充实而有生机。 ⑥此句使用了“generally speaking”作为上下段落的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。这篇佳作是本模块语法(比较级)与本模块话题写作结合的典范，因此比较级的准确运用是本文的一大亮点。 【学以致用】 Ⅰ.写作微技能：1＋n(n≤3)写作拓展策略 请欣赏下面的片段：Great__changes__have__taken__place__on__people's__dinner__table__in__the__past__30__years. 30 years ago，some people were so poor that they didn't have enough food to eat.But now，people have enough money and they can buy anything that they want to eat，such as fish，meat and fruit.As a result，they eat better and they live longer.划线部分就是“1”，相当于主题句，斜体部分就是