人教版小学五年级英语作文话题(20200225160327).pdfVIP

小学英语五年级上册各单元作文范例及点评 My English Teacher Miss Wang is my English teacher. She’s very pretty. She is short and thin. She has two big eyes and a small mouth. Her hairs are long. She like s cats very much. And she like s singing and dancing, too. Her English is very good. Weoften play games in English class es . She is very kind. We all love her. 【要领点评】 这篇作文的题目是“我的英语老师”，是一篇介绍人物的作文。小作者开门见山，直接 点题，首先介绍了英语老师的姓名，然后逐一介绍了她的外貌特征、喜好、英语水平、上课 特点以及师生情感等。 小朋友们在写作文时， 要注意使用自己最熟悉的词 [ 组] ，以免写出一些错句子。 写作时 要注意意思连贯、语句通顺、标点正确、书写清晰、规范等。 My Days of the week I ’m a student and I am in Grade 5.I get up at six o ’clock every day. I have breakfast at half past six, and go to school at seven o’clock. I have classes from Monday to Friday. I have an English class on Friday. I have a PE class on Tuesday. I usually go shopping and watch TV on the weekend. 【要领点评】 这篇作文的题目是“我的一周”，小作者没有说一些空话，而是从自己的亲身经历写 起，叙述了自己一周七天的所作所为 , 写得自然、流畅。 小朋友们写作文时要注意人称及谓语动词的变化，要依据提示，结合自己的实际，写 自己身边熟悉的事情。 My Favourite Food Do you know what this is? Its colour is yellow. It ’s long and thin. It looks like a small boat. Guess! What is it?Oh, it is a banana. Do you know what that is? Guess again! Its colour is orange. It ’s round. It looks like a small ball and a small lantern. Oh, it is an orange. I like them very much. I like ice-creams, too. Chocolates and candies are yummy. I like them very much. How about you? What ’s your favourite food? 【要领点评】 My Favourite Food 是一篇很成功的文章，小作者并不是简单地列举出自己最喜欢的 每一种食物，而是有详有略地进行介绍。整篇文章用词准确、语言流畅、没有语法错误。另 外，文章中出现了一些生词，可见小作者是用心查字典了。 I can help do housework I am a girl. My name is Li Ling. I ’m in Class Three, Grade Five. I ’m helpful at home. I can water the flowers, empty the t