完美的英文求职信：如何修改你的英文求职信.docxVIP

实用文档系列 文档编号：YL-SY-59262 第 第 PAGE 1 页 共 NUMPAGES 1 页 完美的英文求职信：如何修改你的英文求职信 一、求职信的第一段是用来说明写信的目的，不宜用分词句子，比如用下面的句子做开头，因为这样的句子被人用得大多，显得陈腐，失去特点。replying toyour advertisement...answering your advertisement...believing that there is anopportunity...再比较下面例句。每一组里面(1)句较差，经过修改后(2)句显得比较恰当。a:(1) replying to your recentadvertisement in the boston evening globe， I wish to apply for the position ofsales manager.(2) I am applying for the position of sales manager. I believe myqualifications will meet your exacting requirements.b:(1) I believe afterreading your advertisement in this mornings journal that you are offering justthe opportunity i am looking for.(2) your advertisement in this morningsjournal for an adjustment manager prompted me to apply for thisposition.二、在提到希望得到的待遇时，可用类似的句子：Id prefer not to set a salary， but since youask， i consider 6，500 a month to be satisfactory.its hard for me to say whatmy salary should be set at， but if pressed i would have to ask for a month as aninitial salary.I dont feel that i should set my own salary， as I am happyenough to have the privilege of working for you. However,I would consider amonth satisfactory compensation for myapprenticeship.三、提起或要求待遇时不要过分谦虚或表示歉意，下列句子不宜使用：as for salary， i do not know whatto say. would $4，500 a month be too much?do you think i would be asking too muchif i said 5，000 dollars a month?you know what my services are worth better thani do. all i want is a livingwage.四、关于求职信结尾怎么写?下面也有例句。每一组里面(1)句较差，经过修改后(2)句显得比较恰当。a:(1)软弱、羞怯的： if you think ican fill the position after you have read my letter， i shall be glad to talkwith you.(2)改写后(较佳)： if my qualifications meet your standards， i would be happyto speak with you in person.b:(1)怀疑，不妥、不安全的： if you are interested， please letme know immediately， as im sure an interview will convince you im the manfor the job.(2)改写后：I would like to request an interview. you can reach me bytelephone at bei