2020高考英语一轮复习循序写作第四周不落俗套的亮点词汇课件牛津译林版.ppt

第二步 用高级表达增分 阅卷时，一篇高考作文往往在 1 分钟内就被判定生死， 大众化的词汇、平庸的表达已使长时间工作的阅卷老师产生 了视觉疲劳。在词汇方面：如果一篇作文中突然出现几个 与 众不同、让人眼前一亮的词汇 ，阅卷老师的给分也绝不会吝 啬；在句式方面：如果多运用一些 并列句和复合句等高级句 式 ，并注意句式的灵活多变，使文章读起来抑扬顿挫，让自 身深厚的语言功底得以体现，阅卷老师一定会毫不犹豫地将 你的作文定位于五档线。 第四周 不落俗套的亮点词汇 写作最基本的要求是考查遣词造句的能力，遣词的原则 是表达准确、地道自然、生动形象。如果在掌握了最基本词 汇的基础上，能够将一些常用词汇进行升华，就将成为高考 作文获得高分的亮点之一。 一、巧用 4 招，实现由低级向高级的转化 第 1 招： “ 语 ” 众不同，避免人云亦云 写作时恰当得体地使用别人可能想不到的词汇或表达，会 给阅卷老师耳目一新的感觉。 ① I am very glad to hear from you. → I am exceedingly delighted to hear from you.(2018· 全国 卷 Ⅲ 写作佳句 ) ② My job application form and personal resume have been prepared and I sincerely hope you can help me correct them. → My job application form and personal resume have been prepared and I sincerely hope you can help me polish them.(2016· 全国卷 Ⅰ 写作佳句 ) ③ I should be free any time after school next week. → I should be available any time after school next week.(2016· 全国卷 Ⅲ 写作佳句 ) 第 2 招：更新换代，避免重复 写作时应尽量避免重复使用相同的词语，要用贴切多样的词语 来展示自己的水平。用词不同、表达方式迥异，也是高级用法。 ① On hearing the news, some of my classmates and I formed a group to take part in the competition.I know you once took part in a robotics competition and won the award, so you must have accumulated much experience in it. → On hearing the news, some of my classmates and I formed a group to take part in the competition.I know you once participated in a robotics competition and won the award, so you must have accumulated much experience in it.(2018· 天津高考写作佳句 ) ② The box- office income of Chinese movies witnessed a constant increase from about 17 billion yuan in 2012 to over 40 billion in 2015 ...However, China witnessed a decline in its economic growth rate last year. → The box- office income of Chinese movies witnessed a constant increase from about 17 billion yuan in 2012 to over 40 billion in 2015 ...However, China saw a decline in its economic growth rate last year.(2017· 江苏高考写作佳句