荷塘月色 三个译本对比.ppt

荷塘月色 朱自清 Moonlight over the Lotus Pond 朱纯深译 Moonlight over the Lotus Pond 杨宪益、戴乃迭译 Moonlight over the Lotus pond 李明译  第一段  ■①这几天心里颇不宁静 [朱译]① I have felt quite upset recent!y [杨戴译]① The last few days have found me very restless. [李明译]① These days have found me quite in turmoil  ■②今晚在院子里坐着乘凉,忽然想起日日走过的 荷塘,在这满月的光里,总该另有一番样子吧 [朱译]② Tonight, when I was sitting in the yard enjoying the cool, it occurred to me that the Lotus Pond, which I pass by everyday, must assume quite a different look in such moonlit ■[杨戴译]② This evening as I sat in the yard to enjoy the cool, it struck me how different the lotus pool [I pass every day] must look under a full moon [李明译]② Tonight as I was sitting in my yard enjoying the cool, I suddenly thought of the lotus pond I pass by every day on such a fully-moonlit night, it must assume a different outlook  ③月亮浙渐地升高了,墙外马路上孩子们的欢笑,已经听 不见了;妻在屋里拍着闰儿,迷迷糊糊地哼着眠歌 [朱译]③ A full moon was rising high in the sky; the laughter of children playing outside had died away; in the room, my wife was patting the son, Run-er, sleepily humming a cradle [杨戴译]③ The moon was sailing higher and higher up the heavens, the sound of childish laughter had died away from the lane beyond our wall, and my wife was in the house patting Juner and humming a lullaby to him [李明译]③As, the moon was rising higher and higher up in the sky, the laughter of children playing had died away from the alleys beyond our wall. Inside our home, my wife was patting om son-Ran'er, sleepily humming a cradle song