英汉翻译增减词.pptVIP

三顾茅庐 刘备:“天哪,我的老伙计,你想知道我为什么来三次吗?喜是见 鬼,其实我也不太了解,看上帝的份上,为什么不请我进去喝杯 茶?哦,他在睡觉?真是太不可思议了,究竞是谁给了他这样的 信,还有什么会比等待一个皇叔的造访更令人兴奋的呢?嘿, 你要是再不出山,小心我用靴子狠狠踢你的屁股,我发誓,我真 这样做。” fom人人网刘备主页 Translationese Translationese 翻译腔 表达不流畅、不地道的翻译文体” “佶屈聱牙的翻译语言” 《英汉大词典》陆谷孙 English-Chinese Translation Addition and omission Contrastive Studies of English and Chinese Hypotaxis parataxis(形合与意合) Substitution Repetition(替换与重复 hypotaxis Changes of information, if any, concerning the contents of this Section will be found in the appendix at the end of this book 从句之间的依赖或者主从关系由连接词来维系,已表示其结构关系。 --方梦 显性连贯 overt cohesion E. g. who, whom, that, which, but, (n)either 本节内容如有更改均见本书末附录 Parataxis 1人不犯我,我不犯人。2不进则退 从句间的连接多依靠语义的贯通,并无明显的连接词 方梦之 隐性连贯 covert coherence Eg紧缩句四字格 I We will not attack unless we are attacked 2 More forward, or youlI fall behind Substitution In any case work does not include time, but power does 在任何情况下,功不包括时间,但功率包括时间 English generally uses pro-forms or substitutes to avoid etition Repetition 房间里空空荡荡,他走来走去,这儿停停,那儿停 停,东摸摸,西瞧瞧。 Walking up and down the empty room, he stopped here and there to touch or look Chinese repetition of words or meanings is rhetorical or grammatical 增减的原则 “善删者字去而意留,善敷者词殊而义显” 刘勰《文心雕龙熔裁篇》 增词不增意,减词不减意