专题10 读后续写布局思维之设置故事开端-2021年高考英语培优计划之思维型课堂.docxVIP

2021年高考英语培优计划之思维型课堂10 读后续写布局思维之设置故事开端 【思维路径】 一个好的故事开头就好比是一堂成功的课的导入，能够迅速抓住学生和老师们的兴趣，并且愿意听下去，跟着授课老师的思路走。一个好的故事开头就好比是一个带着香味十足的诱饵，诱使读者上钩并且饶有趣味地看完。而一个拙劣的故事开头，定会让读者大倒胃口，恹恹欲睡。“well begun is half done！”可见，写好一个好故事的好开头是多么的重要。那么在时间紧迫的考场上的英语读后续写的过程中，如何写出靓丽的开头呢？我们可以从语法手段和写作涉及的内容来具体涉及故事的开端。 1.开端布局思维1：副词突显动作等【典例赏析】 Carefully,?he stepped over all the broken glass.Joyfully?he skipped up the street.【真题再现】 Para 1：?(2016. 10浙江高考读后续写范文摘录)Para1：But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again.?Immediately, an absolute darkness ruled the forest.?（时间副词衔接+环境描写）2.开端布局思维2：形容词短语表明心态 【典例赏析】 Curious to know what was inside, he tiptoed into the dark cave.Unable to say a word, he was rooted to the spot.【真题再现】 ?(2016.10浙江高考读后续写范文摘录)Para 1:?But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again.?Desperate and hopeless,?Jane?knelt down, tears streaming down her face.?（并列情绪形容词） ?(2016.10浙江高考读后续写范文摘录)Para 2:?It was daybreak when Jane woke up.?Weak as she was, she struggled to her feet, continuing searching for?assistance.?（状态形容词+as/though 引导的倒装句） (2018.06浙江高考读后续写范文摘录)Para 1: ?Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse.?Afraid that I might hurt the lovely small creature, I automatically let out a cry to stop my horse.?(情绪形容词+从句) (2018.06浙江高考读后续写范文摘录)Para 2: We had no idea where we were and it got dark.?Exhausted and hungry, I wondered if we could find our way back.?3.开端布局思维3：非谓语动词的烘托 【典例赏析】 Looking?around him cautiously, he slipped into the room and softly closed the door.Exhausted, he was glad the race was finally over.【真题再现】 (2016.10浙江高考读后续写范文摘录) Para1: But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again.?Feeling disappointed,?Jane?had to stay alone for another night.?（现在分词+情绪形容词） (2016.10浙江高考读后续写范文摘录) Para 2:?It was daybreak when Jane woke up.?Feeling refreshed,?she continued to walk along the?stream?to find the way out.（现在分词+状态形容词） 4.开端布局思维4：使用从句 【典例赏析】 As he walked, he whistledAlthough he was afraid, he jumped right in.5.开端布局思维5：使用介词短语 【典例赏析】