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2016 年浙江新高考英语题型解读 —概要写作
一、 2016 年浙江新高考《考 明》英 写作
第二 :概要写作( 分 25 分)
下面短文,根据其内容写一篇 60 左右的内容概要。
??Gettingridofdirt,intheopinionofmostpeople,isagoodthing.However,thereisnothingfixedaboutattitudestodirt.
??Intheearly16thcentury,peoplethoughtthatdirtontheskinwasameanstoblockoutdisease,asmedicalopinionhaditthatwashing offdirtwithhotwatercouldopenuptheskinandletillsin.Aparticulardangerwasthoughtolieinpublicbaths.By1538,theFrenchkin ghadclosedthebathhousesinhiskingdom.SodidthekingofEnglandin1546.ThusbeganalongtimewhentherichandthepoorinEur opelivedwithdirtinafriendlyway.HenryIV,KingofFrance,wasfamouslydirty.Uponlearningthatanoblemanhadtakenabath,the kingorderedthat,toavoidtheattackofdisease,thenoblemanshouldnotgoout.
??Thoughthebeliefinthemerit( 好 )ofdirtwaslong-lived,dirthasnolongerbeenregardedasaniceneighboreversincethe18cent ury.Scientificallyspeaking,cleaningawaydirtisgoodtohealth.Cleanwatersupplyandhandwashingarepracticalmeansofpreven tingdisease.Yet,itseemsthatstandardsofcleanlinesshavemovedbeyondsciencesinceWorldWarII.Advertisementsrepeatedlys elltheidea:clothesneedtobewhiterthanwhite,clothseversofter,surfacestoshine.Hasthehatefordirt,however,gonetoofar?
??Attitudestodirtstilldifferhugelynowadays.Manyfirst-timeparentsnervouslytrytowarntheirchildrenofftouchingdirt,which mightberesponsibleforthespreadofdisease.Onthecontrary,MaryRuebush,anAmericanimmunologist( 免疫学家 ),encourages childrentoplayinthedirttobuildupastrongimmunesystem.Andthelatter( 后者 )positionisgainingsomeground.
(原 范文, 供参考 )
Onepossibleversion:
??Peoplehavemixedopinionstowardsdirtonourskin.( 要点 ?1)Foralongtimeinhistory,peopleofsomeEuropeancountries,such
asFrance,believedthatdirtprotectedpeoplefromgettingill.( 要点 ?2)However,peoplebegantochangetheirattitudestodirtabout2 00yearsago.Peoplehavebeentoldthatwashingdirtoffourbodycankeepushealthy.( 要点 ?3)However,somescientistsbelievetha texposuretosomedirtmayhelpourimmunesystem.( 要点 ?4)
【范文点 】
?(一 ) 要点分析
???1.?文章第一段就是本篇文章的主 句,点明了 的 点: However,thereisnothin
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