走进2016高考读后续写备课讲稿.ppt 27页

走进2016高考读后续写;;;;Step 1： Thorough Reading ;;;Step 2： Creative plotting ;Step 2： Creative plotting ;Step 3： Swift drafting ;Step 4： Careful polishing ;But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again. All of Jane’s hope sank into darkness due to only the empty valley replied to her yellow blouse with birds’ sounds at a distance. When the pretty beautiful memory flashed back in her mind, Jane felt really regret to walk away and her eyes were filled with tears shining like a stream. She take some of the berries, which was the only one can support her for a while, then she fell asleep with upset.;It was daybreak when Jane woke up. She heard a familiar sound calling her name, when she found she was surrounded by trees. She yelled loudly and rushed into the direction where the sound came, as soon as she figured out that Tom was finding her. Tom heard Jane’s voice, as she was appeared in her sight, he dashed to her and hugged her tightly without hesitation. Both of them were survived by a helicopter that found them in time. ;Paragraph 1: But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again. Jane had to stay alone in the forest for another cold night. Although she felt a little sad, she didn’t get fearful. She thought about Tom. “He must have called for those helicopters. Maybe he was in one of them and will come back again! I have to guide him tomorrow.” She fell asleep and dreamed of seeing Tom.?;Paragraph 2: It was daybreak when Jane woke up. She ate some berries and then walked along the stream, hoping to find a suitable place to guide the helicopter. Fortunately, she saw a huge flat rock in an open area at a distance. She rushed to the rock, climbed onto it and waited. To her great joy, the helicopter appeared again. The nearer it got, the more she flagged the yellow blouse. Luckily, the helicopter didn’t miss Jane this time and it landed near the big rock slowly. Tom jumped off the helicopter and ran towards Jane. She broke down and burst into tears. ?