2016最新!中考英语模拟试题和教材考点研究九上Unit1课件.ppt

2. 示例：With the help of my classmates, I have made much progress in English in the past three years. 仿写句：在朋友的帮助下，刘伟慢慢变得活泼而且愿意主动和别人说话。 _______________________________________ 开头句： 1. I am very glad that I have made great progress in the past three years. 2. Great changes in our country have taken place in the past 20 years. 3. My life has changed a lot in the past three years. 中间句： 1. I used to be a bit shy, but now I become outgoing. 2. With the help of teachers and classmates, I have made great progress in English. 3. My parents and my teachers used to worry about me, but now they are both pleased with me. 4. At that time, I was interested in computer games and I spent plenty of time on it. 结尾句： 1. More and more tall buildings which are modern and beautiful have appeared. 2. The streets are wider. The water is clearer. 3. Your can see grass here and there. It’s becoming more and more beautiful. 4. Day by day, I get on very well with my classmates. 5. Now, I like sports and I often play basketball with my classmates after school. 6. So I become taller and stronger than before. （2015吉林） 回顾三年的初中生活，父母的教诲与支持始终伴你成长，使你进步。那些发生在你与父母之间的故事，看似平淡却值得回味与珍藏。请以“The Story of My Progress”为题，写一篇文章。 典例剖析 要求: 1. 讲述一件发生在你与父母之间的事情，可适度发挥。 2. 词数80字左右，文中不得出现真实的姓名与学校名称。 ________________________________________________________________________________ 【审题指导】细读所给文字提示，可以提取以下信息： 1. 本文要求写一篇过去发生的记叙文，故全文使用一般过去时表达；因主要是写自己与父母之间的故事，故全文以第一人称与第三人称为主进行陈述。 2. 为了使文章内容流畅、连贯，可适当使用一些关联词语；为了增强文章的可读性，注意使用不同的句式结构进行表达。 3. 在写作时，要注意记叙文的特点：交代故事发生的时间、地点、人物、过程。 4. 词数：80词左右，文中不得出现真实的姓名与学校名称。 【写作导图】 The Story of My Progress Three years ago During the three years Now shy ;was afraid to speak in public encouraged me to take part in ;took me to the park to practice outgoing and confident 【范文点评】 The Story of My Progress ①My progress has connected with my mother. ②Three years ago, I was a shy girl. I was afraid to speak in public. My mother was worried abou