汉英篇章翻译技巧综合分析.docx

C-E 汉英篇章翻译：技巧综合分析 阿Q逞强(《阿Q正传》节选) 鲁迅 杨宪益、戴乃迭译 阿Q将衣服摔在地上，吐一口唾沫，说： "这毛虫！” “癞皮狗，你骂谁？ ”王胡轻蔑的抬起眼来说。 阿Q近来虽然比较的受人尊重，自己也更髙傲些，但和那些打惯的闲人们见而还胆 怯，独有这回却非常武勇了。(4)这样满脸胡子的东西，也敢出言无状么？ “谁认便骂谁！ ”他站起来，两手插在腰间说。 “你的计头痒了么？ ”王胡也站起来，披上衣服说。 阿Q以为他要逃了，抢进去就是一拳。(8)这拳头还未达到身上，已经被他抓住了， 只一拉，阿Q跄跄踉踉的跌进去，立刻又被王胡扭住了辫子，要拉到墙上照例去碰头。 君子动口不动手'！”阿Q歪着头说。 王胡似乎不是君子，并不理会，一连给他碰了五下，又用力的一推，至于阿Q跌岀 六尺多远，这才满足的去了。 The True Story of Ah Q (An Excerpt) Lu Xun Translated by Yang Xianyi and Gladys Yang Ah Q flung his jacket on the ground? spat, and swore, “ Hairy worm!" " Mangy dog, who are you calling names? " Whiskers Wang looked up contemptuously. Although the relative respect accorded him in recent years had increased Ah Q s pride, he was still rather timid when confronted by those loafers accustomed to fighting. But today he was feeling exceptionally pugnacious. (4) How dare a hairy-cheeked creature like this insult him? " If the cap fits, wear it. " he retorted, standing up and putting his hands on his hips. 、’ Are your bones itching? " demanded Whiskers Wang, standing up too and draping his jacket over his shoulders? Thinking that the fellow meant to run away, Ah Q lunged forward to punch him?(8) But before his fist reached the target, his opponent seized him and gave him a tug which sent him staggering? Then Whiskers Wang seized his queue and started dragging him towards the wall to knock his head in the time-honored manner. " ' A gentleman uses his tongue but not his hands! ' " protested Ah Q. his head on one side. Apparently Whiskers Wang was no gentleman, for without paying the slightest attention to what Ah Q said he knocked his head against the wall five times in succession, then with a great push shoved him two yards away, after which he walked off in triumph? (冯庆华：《实用翻译教程》，上海外语教育岀版社) ［分析］ 选词（diction）是本译文的一大特点，肖选的这部分原文中有五处“说”，译者根据上下文 分别用不同的词翻译。具体分析见下： 句（1 ）：选词/具体化和减词:译者没有把原文中的“衣服”译为“clothes“（ a superordinate）, 而是“jacket" {Jacket is a hyponym of clothes^因为“说”后面紧跟的内容是骂人的话，所 以这里的“说”译为"swore";原文中的“这毛虫”的“这”被省略。 句（2）：减