江苏专用高考英语二轮培优复习专题五书面表达第一讲提高语言表达技巧课件3.ppt

第一讲 │ 提高语言表达技巧 高考书面表达最高档次的评分标准中，要求“词汇丰富，有修辞意识，显示出较 强的语言运用能力”。因此要想在高考英语写作中取得高分，就必须使用一定的高级 词汇和句式，为文章增加闪光点，避免单一、呆板的句式，从而增添语言表达的多样 性和灵活性，提高文章的档次。 写作四亮点 1. 肯定不如双否好 修辞的使用在写作中是很大的亮点，双重否定也是种修辞，可以在文章中设计双重 否定的句子。 [ 典例 ] The postman comes on time every day. → The postman never fails to come on time every day. [ 典例 ] He believes that he has enough time to challenge himself. → He believes that it is never too late to challenge himself. [ 典例 ] Ms.Li spent a wonderful time with us ， but we know that we should thank her for all her hard work and guidance very much. → Ms.Li spent a wonderful time with us ， but we know that we cannot thank her enough for all her hard work and guidance. [ 典例 ] I quite agree with this view. → I can't agree more with this view. 应用类似的修辞会在高考中为考生加分。 2. 陈述不如倒装妙 在写作中阅卷老师喜欢看到的高级语法共有五种：倒装、强调、从句、独立主格或 分词结构以及虚拟语气。倒装是一种最简单易行的使句子呈现亮点的方法。在高中 阶段只需掌握倒装的四种形式，足以应对写作，如何应用倒装，有很多方法和技巧。 (1) 否定词开头 [ 典例 ] I will never marry you. → Never will I marry you. 其他的否定词，如 not ， seldom ， hardly 等开头的句子倒装都是比较好的句子。 (2) 地点状语开头 [ 典例 ] Our library is in the center of our school. → In the center of our school lies our library. [ 典例 ] There are some flowers on the bank. → On the bank stand some flowers. 在表达地点时就把地点状语放在句首，后面进行主谓倒装，这样做的好处之一是倒 装本身就是高级结构，第二是倒装后把真正的主语放到了句子的末尾，后面还可以 继续加从句，使整个句子呈现更多的亮点。 [ 典例 ] In the center of our school lies our library ， which is between the garden and the teaching building. (3)only ＋介词短语 [ 典例 ] We can live in more comfortable and beautiful surroundings only in this way. → Only in this way can we live in more comfortable and beautiful surroundings. (4) 形容词＋ as ＋主语＋谓语动词 [ 典例 ] Although I felt disappointed at the shabby campus and the poorly-equipped classroom ， I found the teachers patient and considerate. → Disappointed as I felt at the shabby campus and the poorly-equipped classroom ， I found the teachers patient and considerate. [ 典例 ] Although our country is rich ， we have a lot of problems. → Rich as our country is ， we have a lot of problems. 还有其他的倒装结构： [ 典例 ]