【创意版】读后续写father_x27s best flowers.ppt

* * * * * * * * 2018.9.29 Father’s best flowers .精品课件. * 英语科考试说明 读后续写： 提供一篇350词以内的语言材料，原文多是情节丰富的记叙文，偶有少量的议论文，要求考生依据该材料内容、所给段落开头语和所标示关键词进行续写（150词左右），将其发展成一篇与给定材料有逻辑衔接、情节和结构完整的短文。 .精品课件. * 第二节：读后续写（满分25分） 阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。 注意： 所续写短文的词数应为150左右； 应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语； 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好； 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。 How to choose the underlined key words in your writing? How to make full use of the given sentences and the plot? How to make the story coherent and logical? .精品课件. * My Dad’s Best Flowers The title: .精品课件. * What's the writing style of the passage? A. Narration 记叙文 B. Exposition 说明文 C. Argumentation 议论文 .精品课件. * A story when where who what how why Step 1. Read for basic information .精品课件. * Who: Mom, Dad, sister and I When: When living in the first home Where: balcony What: carnations Characters Plots Theme Step 1. Read for basic information Why/how: .精品课件. * I remember my first home was a small apartment on the second floor with a lovely and spacious balcony. When my mom was busy in the kitchen she let me stay on the balcony watching the kids playing in the street. On that balcony I played sometimes with my elder sister, Maria. She was seven years old and when my mom was absent she was like a mother to me. The balcony was a great hobby place for my father. After his work he used to grow carnations (康乃馨) in flower boxes. His carnations were red, pink and white, and everyone appreciated them for their beauty. Para1. My father grew carnations on the balcony and everyone appreciated their beauty. Part1 the Balcony lovely and spacious Why ? Mother let me stay on the balcony ..watching… Play with elder sister A great hobby place for father –grow carnations .精品课件. * He took care of them with so much love and devotion. He dealt carefully with his flowers like a mother taking care of her baby. Many times I sat on the floor of the balcony for hours observing him a